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While These Strings Sweetly Sing

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While These Strings Sweetly Sing

Alone in the dim there's a candle there gleaming
While these strings sweetly sing.
I see your face in a vision that's fleeting
As soft chords gently cry.

You couldn't know how much I love you,
You don't even know my name.
I've watched you stride laughing and lovely,
Confident in your fame.

I wish I could share this song that I wrote you
While these strings sweetly sing.
Then touch your hand as I bid you adieu
As soft chords gently cry.

You couldn't know how much I love you,
You don't even know my name.
I've watched you stride laughing and lovely,
Confident in your fame.

So here I shall play, with my love's inspiration
While these strings sweetly sing.
And be content with my dream's consolation
As soft chords gently cry.

Written by Craig Cornish
One of my favorite melodies ever written by anyone.
These are lyrics written to George Harrison's melody
While My Guitar Gently Weeps

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  1. Date: 2/10/2014 6:14:00 PM
    Craig, nice one.SKAT

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 9:42:00 AM
    Great lyrical winning work..Way to go..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 1/9/2014 9:31:00 AM
    Congrats on your win Craig, A very good poem.....Roger

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 11:40:00 PM
    What a lovely poem and a fine win. Congrats on the win, Craig

  1. Date: 1/8/2014 3:02:00 PM
    So romantic......and yet, I am not surprised, ...the music that has inspired many of your contests, just blows me away with the beauty and the romance that is part of your soul. This again, proves your love of music! :) We have similar the way!

  1. Date: 3/20/2013 3:45:00 PM
    Congratulations on your fine win with this fine poem, Craig. And on all those other recent wins I notice, now, that you've racked up. - Red

  1. Date: 3/16/2013 12:21:00 PM
    Craig.. Congratulations on your win :-) PD

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 10:37:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Craig...... cheers

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 1:23:00 PM
    Congratulations Craig a stunning entry xx

  1. Date: 3/15/2013 12:50:00 AM
    Craig - I was singing the song in my head while reading your lyrics ...Perfect fit...Love the two repeating second lines in each verse...Great write and congratulations, my friend - Tim

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 7:25:00 PM
    One of my favorites Beatles tunes, Craig! Congratulations!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:14:00 PM
    Congratulations outstanding poem...and well deserved win.....great song too..Donna

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 10:23:00 AM
    Harrison was a great player and writer, as I can see you are , also. RAY

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 6:19:00 AM
    Just beautiful, Craig....Congrats!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 3:41:00 AM
    Good taste in music and a good write. Congratulations Craig.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 12:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your grand win friend Craig...two thumbs up for this great poem of yours. cheers!!! Hugs, maria

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Just beautiful, Craig!! Congratulations on a super win! Always, Annalise

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 7:45:00 PM
    Great words Craig well done,,,Seren

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 5:58:00 PM
    congrats on a great win Craig...

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 2:29:00 PM
    Craig oohhhhh this is great, I love the melodic tune in my head as I read it...David