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When I'm with you

When I’m with you

When I see the beauty
Of that sparkle in your eyes
When you look at me with laughter
And you seem so very wise
I look at your aliveness
And my heart it skips a beat
My darling you’re adorable
So precious, and so sweet.

When we’re driving in the car
And you’re singing with the set
You seem so very happy
Like your life has no regrets
And I listen with my heart strings
And I want to sing with you
That’s when I know I love you
With a love so very true.

When we’re walking in the sunshine
And our minds are wide awake
Your mood it has the beauty
And the sparkle of a lake
As it lies beneath the summer sun
How I love you more than life
You be my special angel
My best friend, and my wife

5 January 2014 @ 0530hrs

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  1. Date: 1/7/2014 5:09:00 AM
    OH WOW! WOW WOW WOW WOW!!!! Lovely write....oh how precious and sweet....enchanting. So happy you are fulfilled with the love of your life, Peter.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/7/2014 4:45:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you so much Eileen, we've been married for fifty years next year, and it gets sweeter with age. appreciate your comments, my friend....Peter
  1. Date: 1/5/2014 6:19:00 PM
    Hey cuz, a beautiful poem, love the last three lines, you old romantic Alf, a lovely tribute to a lovely lady xxxx

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/6/2014 4:09:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Suzi, my sweet cousin, so nice to hear from you on my pages. And thanks for your email last night. Always good to hear from my favourite Cuz....Peterxxxxx
  1. Date: 1/5/2014 3:40:00 PM
    Thank you, my friend, so nice of you to visit my pages, and comment...Peter

  1. Date: 1/5/2014 4:46:00 AM
    A romantic, beautiful and lovely tribute to her. Well done and compliments of the season to you and yours.

  1. Date: 1/4/2014 8:24:00 PM
    beautiful and very touching! you sound like you're very happy together...

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/5/2014 3:41:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Ilene. I tried once doing without her, but oh how miserable I was. I appreciate all your kind comments....Peter
  1. Date: 1/4/2014 7:26:00 PM
    Thank you so much for that poem my dear and how lovely of you to share it among your many PS friends, I am a very lucky lady. Luv........Ve..x

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/5/2014 3:42:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    My love for you I would share with the world, you are so worth it. So nice of you to comment, my angel....Peterxxxxxxx
  1. Date: 1/4/2014 6:50:00 PM
    Beautiful write and tribute to your wife. That is a special bond you have which I know took work and sacrifice. Best wishes to you and your wonderful wife. Take care Peter.

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 1/5/2014 3:44:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you once again Vincent, for your kind comments. I feel that if one has never loved they have not really lived....Peter