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Wheatfield With Crows

Sinuous wheat stalks swelter and writhe in Auvers' July-dry heat:
a too-bright arid glittering, a delirious rippling of sizzling citrine.
Doom-dark crows convene to swoop and scavenge on turmoil's tempest
under indigo storm-swirled skies. A dead-end decision on a nowhere road;
his last-stand canvas smashed aside; a last stride into the smouldering gold.

*Vincent Van Gogh's 'Wheatfield With Crows' is believed to be his last painting

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  1. Date: 6/12/2015 4:21:00 AM
    Hi Charlotte.. This is such a terrific write.. Congrats on being a featured Soup Poet this week! I look forward to reading more...

  1. Date: 6/12/2015 1:31:00 AM
    Charlotte, Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. SKAT love

  1. Date: 6/8/2015 3:20:00 PM
    With your last line, one must think of those passionate sunflowers of his. Enjoyed. Congrats on the selection. Love, daver

  1. Date: 3/25/2015 2:52:00 AM
    Your poem conveys an inner knowing of this talented, yet tormented soul. Excellent Charlotte! 7

  1. Date: 8/7/2013 8:00:00 PM
    I came back to read this again, and now realize just how fine a poem it is. You are the master of alteration, and again weaving in color... Jack

  1. Date: 5/23/2013 9:05:00 AM
    Very nice... I especially enjoyed "A dead-end decision on a nowhere road." Jack

  1. Date: 2/9/2013 7:28:00 AM
    Congratulations Charlotte , this is a lovely piece well done xx

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 8:45:00 PM
    Charlotte, :-) Congratulations with your wonderful win in Heather's "Famous Art" poetry contest. *Goodnight~LINDA

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 4:35:00 PM
    wow, what incredible alliteration, my dear. So good to see you again by perusing the winners list. Your writing really matches the artwork of Van Gogh! Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 1:56:00 PM
    Kuddos on your win, Charlotte! Ruben.

  1. Date: 2/8/2013 12:56:00 PM
    One of Van Gogh's masterpieces! Your descriptions are breathtaking, Charlotte. Your poem picked me up and threw me right into the center of this painting - amidst the "sizzling citrine." Wonderful job. Congratulations on your win in my contest!

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 3:15:00 PM
    Congrats Charlotte on your HM in Brian's contest with this wonderful write and entry luv..

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 7:57:00 AM
    take a bow, charlotte.. big congrats! :) hugggs

  1. Date: 6/3/2011 5:45:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Brian Strand's contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 5/31/2011 6:06:00 PM
    I love this, Charlotte! If I am not mistaken, didn't VanGogh's sister n law promote this lovely piece of artwork? Not even famous until after he died. A real beauty--I was delighted to write my first ekphrasis for this stuff! Thanks for your comments on my work. REally need help from you more experienced poets with more detailed critiques upon occasion. :) Thanks for yours. Gwendolen

  1. Date: 5/30/2011 10:18:00 AM
    Smile ~ “Sweeet Charlotte.” ~ I do love the style and somewhat uniqueness of “Your Beauties” wonderful poetry my dear ~ Tis comparitive as unto a painting by say, Vincent himself; allowing the reader to gaze upon the colours and the scenes for a moment of falling into its canvases eyes ~ Thanks for stopping by my dear; very kind ~ “My Love to 'You Always, & All You Love,'" John!:) ~

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 10:06:00 PM
    well, cant' say I know the painting,buit this ROCKS. one of the best renderings of this form that i have seen yet in the contest. I am glad I found this poem here today!

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 9:12:00 PM
    Great entry,.. p.d.

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 11:09:00 AM
    It seems you have captured the painting wonderfully here Charlotte.Thanks for your kind comment at my page......

  1. Date: 5/27/2011 10:39:00 AM
    wow didn't know that, he was a great painter as this was a great piece of fine work you did. thank you for commenting on Rain Drops Making Love, think this is first time you paid my poetry a visit, so don't be a stranger, i will read some more of your poetry later, but your are good.