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Weight of the World

Hiding the sound of the mind,Im losing. Crumpling up, Buried inside this tomb, Alone with our thoughts, Tired of being us. The sky’s gray with gloom. Hoping the sun shines through, The darkest of clouds, Clearing my mind, Giving me light, The weight of the world has got me down, I feel I’ve had enough, Enough for right now. The worlds falling apart.

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:16:00 PM
    Camay, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:29:00 AM
    Well done. Welcome to the Soup. Cheers. Rick

  1. Date: 3/11/2013 4:27:00 PM
    A touching and well written poem, Camay. - Welcome to P-Soup. - oxox / / Anne-Lise :)