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We were kids

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We were kids

We have all changed places
Though we both came from the same place
I still recall when we were kids;
We used to be stubborn 
Playin’ 'round the neighborhood scrappin'
And fighting all times.
Just remember when we were kids,
Used to stress up mama, traded places and acted kiddies.
Now we heavy in the game going lame
Cause the devils tame; the demons are vultures 
Cause it’s a culture, why we all sick!
If only we could be kids again, cause hangin’ out
Playin’ dozens was a good one,
Kickin’ up dust till dawn 
Back when we were kids.

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  1. Date: 12/13/2011 5:16:00 PM
    so true! Joy

  1. Date: 8/11/2011 7:56:00 AM
    Memory lane seems very pleasant..Very interesting thoughts penned..Sara

    Date: 8/11/2011 9:28:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Congrats on your win..Sara
  1. Date: 8/8/2011 8:32:00 PM
    We all came from a kid's point of view,Ambrose. Congratulations on your worthy poem presentation. Agape, Moses

  1. Date: 8/8/2011 4:23:00 PM
    Congratulations on your placement in Moses' "Sayings Of Wisdom" contest Ambrose. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/8/2011 1:26:00 PM
    Congratulations on this win in the contest of John,Ambrose

  1. Date: 8/8/2011 3:35:00 AM
    hey Ambrose,congrats on your win David

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 11:36:00 PM
    Congrats on your win, Ambrose. Nice going. Ralph

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 11:05:00 PM
    Congrats on your win Ambrose... well done...!!!!!

  1. Date: 8/7/2011 10:09:00 PM
    Congrats Ambrose on your great win with these great words of wisdom luv..

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 7:27:00 AM
    this write takes me back to the days when I would play,, nicely penned with much emotion. cory

  1. Date: 8/5/2011 3:45:00 AM
    I really like this Ambrose. I luv the flow of this piece!!!!!!!! Well penned!!!!!!