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We Too Will Drift Away

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We Too Will Drift Away

We will soon find ourselves,
in a much different place.
We thought we were mountains,
that could never drift away.

We are more like the ice in the ocean,
that floats every which way.
Finding ourselves 
drifting farther away.

As much as we say that we'll be close,
one day the truth will come.
We'll know after the time has passed
that memories will be all that's left.

Deep down in our hearts
we'll still know what we were,
but out on the surface
we'll have moved on.

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  1. Date: 8/11/2009 1:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week>>James

  1. Date: 8/11/2009 3:31:00 AM
    a great write, congratulations on your featured poem God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 2:54:00 PM
    Profoundly beautiful write here, Betty!! Good to see your writing featured here at the Soup. Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 4:38:00 AM
    Betty - I wish to congratulate you on having your poetry featured this week – God bless you, MJ

  1. Date: 8/10/2009 3:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week Betty. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 1:41:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured, Betty! Very well penned. Ruben.

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 1:40:00 PM
    Congratulations on being featured, Betty. Keep writing! DAS-J

  1. Date: 8/9/2009 1:15:00 PM
    Interesting reflection. Congratulations on having your poem featured this week. I wish you ongoing success with your writing. Karen