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Warm and bright

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Warm and bright

Warm and bright

so bright,  so bright let through the light!
I want to wake-up and feel just right

through the blinds it found my soul
 now again I'm finally whole

feeling alive, bursting with joy
no longer do I feel destroyed

looking forward to go and play
that's what I want now everyday

please don't let it disappear
for so long I've lived with fear

keep it light and warm inside
I no longer want go and hide

I've been doing it everyday
keep the evil named bipolar away!

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  1. Date: 6/10/2014 11:49:00 AM
    Awesome write...A day at a time indeed!! Thanks for sharing

  1. Date: 6/5/2014 11:32:00 AM
    Bravo! One day at a time, one step at a time... let the sun shine in, my dear! Kindest regards!

  1. Date: 10/10/2012 12:34:00 AM
    I love this! The rhyme is on point. It's a reminder to be grateful for the little joys. You've done well Susan!

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 10:35:00 PM
    Susan,, love this. Thank you for this awesome poem. Goodnight :-)~ PD

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 5:00:00 AM
    I love this optimistic poem. The lines: "through the blinds...." and the followup statement of "now again...." is very descriptive. Thank you for visiting my page and leaving a comment. Yes, second time round, I am lucky to have found the right man. Love, Suzette

  1. Date: 10/8/2012 3:01:00 AM
    Wake up and feel ready for a new day is good . - Hope you will have a lovely new week Susan. - You have written a very good poem, I like it. - oxox love Anne-Lise :)

    Gwynne-Galfe Avatar Susan Gwynne-Galfe
    Date: 10/8/2012 3:52:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you Anne Lise for your nice comment! My writing is usually pretty dark most of the time. So posting something pleasant and airy was a nice change for me!