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Vividly astray

Impetuous is mine behavior,
as her flash in our lonely was directed 
at I 

Off the coverings, they did go,
as hers, marking her entrance…

vividly astray,
her beam

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  1. Date: 11/21/2012 9:18:00 PM
    James,, Stopping by to greet you and every other soup poet, with a special thank you comment, during this wonderful Thanksgiving season. Hope you do not mind the time I am taking to express my sincere appreciation for any support you have offered during the years, or time you have been here on the soup. I am deeply thankful and extend to you my best wishes for a happy and healthy Poetic Magical Thanksgiving Day. *Always & Forever, the Poet Destroyer; -*

  1. Date: 5/9/2012 2:00:00 PM
    Of all, the flashes are the most disturbing, the which you have so cleverly brought out, dear Sir James. Love, daver

  1. Date: 5/8/2012 4:00:00 PM
    Interesting work..Not sure what the interpertation but that lets me draw my own conclusions..Enjoyed reading this eve..Thanks for stopping by, reading, and commenting on my work.I am honored that you liked one enough to place in your favs..Sara

  1. Date: 5/7/2012 11:48:00 AM
    Who needs coverings anyway:? Great way to dispense with details that veil a glorious entrance. Always a joy to read, you do strange things to my mind James! Hugs to you, Lizzie

  1. Date: 5/6/2012 11:29:00 AM
    A gem, uniquely you James. Hope your weekend is a great one :) love Wilma

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 8:53:00 PM
    nicely unusual as always, you come up with some very unique expressions such as vividly astray. ME LIKES that one!!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:50:00 PM
    So passionate, James! One day I hope you have some of your collected love poems published. Have a lovely weekend, my friend! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 3:22:00 PM
    exciting words setting a luv scene James.. u certainly stir a barrage of emotions luv.. see me new poem. TOUCH..blessings dear friend..

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 10:49:00 AM
    sensual undertones nicely crafted, james.. ; ) huggs!

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 10:44:00 AM
    i like this, great one man.

  1. Date: 5/5/2012 6:31:00 AM
    James, naughty but I like it..David