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Venus danced

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Below is the poem entitled Venus danced which was written by poet Bindu Vijayan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Venus danced

He wrote her a song, his strength gentle and hesitant
 In the night sky, their future caught in the moon
 Dream catcher patterns, they spiralled together 
 Painting sunsets, danced creation in innocence 

 Moonbeams stood guard, tangles of silver
 The dew glistening on her heaving shoulders
 Vulcan whispered his ancient secrets
 Easing her into the dance, lulling her fears

 Venus danced, her dark eyes sated
 As they swirled through lifetimes of waiting
 He had been walking to her from all his pasts
 Reaching her side through impossible walls

 Warriors of life, they churn love’s hollows
 They slake their thirst as riddles weave stories
 They fly with each other defending dreamscapes
 They dance together on mysteries deep and high…

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  1. Date: 9/26/2014 9:38:00 AM
    Hi Bindu.....delving once again into your past poetry! This is mysteriously romantic and alluring. He finds the path to her heart with a song of gentle persuasion; she feels the call, putting her at ease and their emotions merge and rise together. A top7 rating for this excellent write. // paul

  1. Date: 1/19/2014 9:32:00 PM
    This was so enjoyable to re read. Exceptional.

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    Date: 1/19/2014 11:11:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you!!! You made my day:)
  1. Date: 10/6/2013 7:11:00 PM
    Hi Bindu, I responded to your Soupmail.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 5:53:00 AM
    yup! 3 in a row! ok....gotta keep workin' @ the deli now.....seeya later....jimbo

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 11:20:00 AM
    Wow........I have not found your poems until now........but if this is an example, I must read them more often. Magical !!

  1. Date: 9/19/2013 8:48:00 AM
    such a beautiful write, brilliantly crafted! enjoyed the read :)

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:46:00 PM
    Hello Bindu, a breathtaking free verse's almost as if she danced to his song by luring with a belly dance... .... captivating the feeling that awaits a lifetime.. enjoyed...Linda

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 8:00:00 AM
    There is a magical feel to this piece. Gorgeous!

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 5:29:00 AM
    Very poetic work that you have penned..Enjoyed reading this one today..Thanks for the stop by my page..Your comment was upliftiing..Sara

  1. Date: 9/18/2013 5:22:00 AM
    Powerful deep imagery portrayed throughout. Its hard to choose one that I particularly like Bindu. '' Keep up the fine writes my friend and I do await to peruse your next new work of art. You're awesome!