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Upon The Day - A Summer Dream

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Upon The Day - A Summer Dream

Pure love    drowning
in a garden of refrain
raging winds    pulsing
pushing out the drenching rain

A song of songs    awaits
as nerves climb the hill tops high
a final breath    as sunlight falls
upon the azure sky

My lovely rose
of silken light
in silent steps    I plea
in murmurous breath    I strain to recite
a heartfelt love to thee

If in this moment
this summer day
a love could be fulfilled
then surely my sweet Desiree
death would not prevail


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  1. Date: 6/23/2013 12:38:00 PM
    Beautiful-love is in the air. Thank you for my placement on your contest. I have not entered a contest for a while. Nice to always get a surprise. Have a great day. love phyl

  1. Date: 6/22/2013 12:23:00 PM
    Flowing...flowing and melodic. How beautiful....

  1. Date: 6/21/2013 7:45:00 PM
    this is really dreamy, and you made it so sublime.

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 7:25:00 PM
    This poem is so beautiful, loved it and I also want to thank you for my placement in your contest Old 10th place poems, I am so honoured. Constance

  1. Date: 6/20/2013 6:57:00 PM
    A nice light love poem! Light & love

  1. Date: 6/18/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Very the layout too...BG