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Below is the poem entitled Untold which was written by poet Raven Sneed. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Blood will spill before the night is over 
Because the story of the untold story unfolded 
Long behold secrets that scared the beauty of her inner soul
Inner child was taken 
At 7 years old 
Whose to blame 
She shall speak no names 
Maybe James 
She's fighting from
Going insane 
She lies to cover the cries 
At midnight to prays
She dies
She told one soul
he laughed and said 
That's not so 
You're just crying for 
Making excuses 
For your recent interactions
With the boys you recently 
How come so cold
you wonder why I'm
Numb to love 
Just listen to the untold story 

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  1. Date: 7/11/2012 5:49:00 AM
    A belated welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Raven. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol