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Unspoken pain

Bitten by the song of the deaf waters
the broken noises are calling
to get away from this nightmare
that is killing me.

and I feel the breeze of the incoming winter
strength I don't have and my eyes are burning,
in frozen thoughts  I search for some answers
to pass the bridge for my life.

between ruins of blood,  bitterness and pain
I warm again the moment with cold and with silence,
I take a deep breath of raw air and illusions
looking how the cruel rain falls.

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  1. Date: 6/4/2009 2:59:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured> James

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 4:31:00 PM
    Some things need to be brought out in the open so the innocent isn't the one suffering. A lot of pain in this write. God Bless. Vince

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 2:54:00 PM
    Congratulations on your featured poem this week! Great write!

  1. Date: 6/2/2009 12:44:00 PM
    God, what a beautiful poem!!!! Patrica Moran

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 4:45:00 PM
    What a powerful poem, and so well deserved to be here among the favorites!! Congratulations!!

  1. Date: 6/1/2009 12:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on being featured this week. Ernilando

  1. Date: 5/17/2009 11:47:00 AM
    Hello Andreea, great job and best wishes in the next round. ~Joseph

  1. Date: 5/3/2009 11:28:00 AM
    Andreea, my belated congrats in making the semi finals...Raul

  1. Date: 4/22/2009 8:45:00 AM
    Beautifully done, Andreea ... love "I search for some answers to pass the bridge for my life" ... great words!! Congratulations on being a "first round survivor" ... smile ... and good luck in the contest!

  1. Date: 4/9/2009 7:31:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it in the semi finals Andreea. Wishing you the best of luck in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/5/2009 9:55:00 AM
    Andreea - Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round, best of luck in the finals – God Bless, MJ

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 9:32:00 PM
    That's a joke.

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 9:31:00 PM
    Yes, quite right, because life's all about pain.

  1. Date: 4/4/2009 5:10:00 PM
    emotional piece, with perfect imageries.a well deserved survival. congrats, all the best in the finals. love Leke

  1. Date: 4/1/2009 3:17:00 AM
    A lovely use of metaphor - great stuff! Congratulatoons on surviving the first tound and good luck. Regards Jem

  1. Date: 3/31/2009 10:16:00 AM
    What metaphors! Deaf waters, frozen thoughts, bridge of life....good stuff. Congratulations on making it to the first round.

  1. Date: 3/30/2009 11:08:00 AM
    Beautifully written, Andreea. Felicitari si numai bine. Love, Iolanda

  1. Date: 1/18/2009 5:25:00 PM
    I really liked the line "Bitten by the song of deaf waters" Line 5 The And"s are not needed. Line 7 would be stronger without "some" "Between ruins of blood, bitterness and pain" IS SPLENDID> Light & Love Debbie Guzzi

  1. Date: 10/14/2008 7:11:00 AM
    This is a well writtten piece of poetry. You had me from the start and kepy me locked in the entire read. Your metaphors are strong and the images are cold and apinful. I loved it.