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Unconsciously Crying

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Unconsciously Crying

This is where I am, while I cherish the silence
About not losing in the distant times of giving in to softness
Of hardships and pains, this is where I stopover,
Unconsciously crying from the immediate rise, thinking I'll be well after.

There are so much lies to cover one another but with hopes and intention
Of telling you the whole truth, yes, with no hesitation,
Not thinking of the difficulty of redeeming the pieces of shattered trust
Because I can still smile while I'm unconsciously crying for I must.

But don't worry, I am still me
All the same like the moon of uncertainty,
Planets and stars may give you a hint of forgiving,
Mercy me, with a sudden downpour of rain because I'm unconsciously crying.

So this is the effect, and maybe someday you'll understand,
Ask your whys and let anger flow if you can't,
It will take long so accompany me to lean me on a wall
Of strength, still unconsciously crying while I comfort my biggest downfall.

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  1. Date: 7/19/2012 8:14:00 AM
    What a wonder of a write loved the line [ like the moon of uncertainty] Congrad's on the fine achievement of getting to round one. Light & Love

  1. Date: 7/18/2012 6:40:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem making it through round one of the PoetrySoup International Poetry Contest. I wish you the best in the finals Angelie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 8:27:00 PM
    I congratulate you, Angelie on your poem winning the first round. I like your poem and its theme. I wish you success in the finals. -Mohammad

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 8:28:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through round one in the PoetrySoup International contest Angeline. I wish you the best in the final round. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 2:55:00 AM
    Dear Angelie, Superb writing. Congratulations on making it through the first round and best wishes on making it to the Finals. Lainie

  1. Date: 5/11/2011 2:47:00 AM
    Beautiful...original...refreshing! to read it over and over again! :)))

  1. Date: 11/13/2010 6:57:00 AM
    Self evaluation and endless well of poetry! Congrad's on your passage to round two! Light & Love

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 5:30:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it into round two..Sara

  1. Date: 11/10/2010 8:43:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poetry making it through the first round of the Poetrysoup site contest Angelie. The best to you in the finals. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/8/2010 9:56:00 AM
    Congratulations on your poem being featured this week Angelie. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/9/2009 9:33:00 AM
    ohmigod. i love this. brilliant. i am "unconsciously crying" also. thank you for sharing this --Raiin Keetly

  1. Date: 10/7/2009 4:05:00 PM
    how true about growth it is! good job

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 7:27:00 PM
    Angelie, kudos on this selected poem going through the finals! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 12:15:00 PM
    This is a brillaint write, in which the poet allows the reader to view the emotions of the soul. Thank you for sharing and congratulations on having this write featured for the week. Many Blessings, Always, Adell

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 10:44:00 AM
    Angelie, congratulations on having this poem featured this week! Ruben.

  1. Date: 9/29/2009 6:36:00 AM
    Congratulations on your wonderful featured poem! Laura :)

  1. Date: 9/26/2009 10:34:00 AM
    Angelie, congratulations on making the first round of the contest...Raul

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 11:08:00 PM
    Congrates on your wonderful poem going through to the finals ... Love Jayne

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 4:37:00 PM
    Congratulations on your poetry being featured this week >> James

  1. Date: 9/25/2009 12:02:00 PM
    Congratulations on making it through the first round in the contest. Good luck in the finals! Karen