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Two Haiku - Flower's and Hummingbird's

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Two Haiku - Flower's and Hummingbird's

~ ~ at twilight closing in shrouded light - white roses weep ~ fluttering free in an evanescent wind- two hummingbird dance ~ ~
3/6/4 4/7/5 Poet - Rick Parise

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  1. Date: 5/1/2012 8:05:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 7:30:00 PM
    Wow, I love this one. Coongrats. BG

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 12:46:00 PM
    Very descriptive and emotive winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara

  1. Date: 4/25/2012 11:38:00 AM
    ..Congratulations with your wonderful win,,, ... ;-) always~PD

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 10:00:00 PM
    Congratulations Rick on your win.

  1. Date: 4/24/2012 9:41:00 PM
    congrats with your wonderful win' Siddy

  1. Date: 4/23/2012 12:52:00 PM
    Loved this one Rick.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.

  1. Date: 4/22/2012 4:30:00 PM
    Truly amazing haiku. hope to see more of yours.

  1. Date: 4/21/2012 9:37:00 PM
    I LOVE these, Rick, and guess what? I saw your blog before you even asked me too!!! let me go see what else you wrote below my comment on the other poem?

  1. Date: 4/16/2012 12:25:00 PM
    I like the images here in these two haikus you penned. I especially liked "white roses weep" Thanks for your comment on my "Poe" poem.

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 10:04:00 PM
    Beautiful imagery!!

  1. Date: 4/14/2012 8:33:00 PM
    wow, these are gorgeous. and I don't care what anybody says. I LOVE personified haiku

    Parise Avatar Rick Parise
    Date: 4/14/2012 8:36:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you........I agree, that's just how i feel when i'm writing........we'll see.......