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Two Haiku - Flower's and Hummingbird's

~ ~ at twilight closing in shrouded light - white roses weep ~ fluttering free in an evanescent wind- two hummingbird dance ~ ~ 3/6/4 4/7/5 Poet - Rick Parise

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Carol Sunshine Brown

Date: 5/1/2012 8:05:00 AM

Congratulations on your win in the "Sweet Flowers & Hummingbirds" contest ^Rick. Love, Carol

Barbara Gorelick

Date: 4/25/2012 7:30:00 PM

Wow, I love this one. Coongrats. BG

Sara Kendrick

Date: 4/25/2012 12:46:00 PM

Very descriptive and emotive winning work..Enjoyed reading..Congrats..Sara

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 4/25/2012 11:38:00 AM

..Congratulations with your wonderful win,,, ... ;-) always~PD

Kash Poet

Date: 4/24/2012 10:00:00 PM

Congratulations Rick on your win.

Skat A

Date: 4/24/2012 9:41:00 PM

congrats with your wonderful win' Siddy

Kash Poet

Date: 4/23/2012 12:52:00 PM

Loved this one Rick.Thanks for your inspiring words at my pages.

Joann Grisetti

Date: 4/22/2012 4:30:00 PM

Truly amazing haiku. hope to see more of yours.

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/21/2012 9:37:00 PM

I LOVE these, Rick, and guess what? I saw your blog before you even asked me too!!! let me go see what else you wrote below my comment on the other poem?

Jancarl Campi

Date: 4/16/2012 12:25:00 PM

I like the images here in these two haikus you penned. I especially liked "white roses weep" Thanks for your comment on my "Poe" poem.

Kash Poet

Date: 4/14/2012 10:04:00 PM

Beautiful imagery!!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 4/14/2012 8:33:00 PM

wow, these are gorgeous. and I don't care what anybody says. I LOVE personified haiku

Rick Parise
Date: 4/14/2012 8:36:00 PM

Thank you........I agree, that's just how i feel when i'm writing........we'll see.......