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Two Entwined

Regret drips slowly 
down the terraced walls, it never falls.
A thick green moss forms in the shadows,
a smothering caul.
~He was a friend to all.~
Forevers were sworn,
all that's left are yesterdays, long gone.
What will tomorrow bring, will it be
the joy for which we long?
~Daughter, Wife, Mother, Mine.~
A blanket shelters
naked, tearful, truths, and pain we'll not see
like the moss it cloaks regret in dark
cloaking you and me.
~Two truthful souls lie here.~
The ending's so near
But still we try - and still we cry on
for little do we know how close it is, 
how far, how near, gone.

Epitaph & Quatrain Sep. 23, 2013
Poets ~ Craig Cornish & Debbie Guzzi

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  1. Date: 10/3/2013 1:37:00 PM
    Emotive and expressive work that you have penned in these lines..Enjoyed reading this winner..Congrats on your win..Sara

  1. Date: 10/3/2013 11:10:00 AM
    wonderful team work...... lovely win............SKAT

  1. Date: 10/2/2013 7:15:00 PM
    great write between you both, congrats on your wins :)

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 7:31:00 PM
    Congratulations on both of your wins in shadows contest. You made an excellent team.

  1. Date: 10/1/2013 3:49:00 PM
    congrats on win in team work contest Ty for entering Shadow x smile

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 9:30:00 AM
    nice colloberation ~always pd

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 7:53:00 AM
    To live in yesterday's regret and tomorrow's dream when life is so short....Such an excellent poem you and deb entwined : )..And tnks for your lovely comment on my simple verse..Much appreciated

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 5:09:00 AM
    Nice intermingled write like a river flows into another, Craig. Good luck