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Crippled,  old
Man opens  the door 
Prattling on
Detritus to ears craving
Dearheart's sweet giggles. 

Form: Shadorma
For Kim Merryman’s ‘Shadorma style’ contest

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  1. Date: 9/12/2012 6:13:00 PM
    Tickled pink to bump into this detailed piece...endearing terminology too! Other than this,,,,I am speechless! Superior scene...gwendolen

  1. Date: 9/1/2012 10:45:00 AM
    JAG, congratulations in Kim's contest. Nice "Shadorma Styling Poem" enjoyed stopping by today. :-) always PD

  1. Date: 8/31/2012 2:44:00 PM
    Enjoyed reading this one today...Congrats on your winning work..Sara

  1. Date: 8/30/2012 6:46:00 AM
    Congratulations on your placement in Kim's "Shadorma Style" contest Jag. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/28/2012 6:33:00 AM
    Nice poem, I see myself a bit in this poem... arthritis, old... take care Lee

  1. Date: 8/27/2012 8:59:00 PM
    What a picture! And I love the giggles! Thank you for supporting my contest, Jag! Love, Kim

  1. Date: 8/25/2012 10:40:00 PM
    I could almost hear the Saturn passage of Gustav Holst's "The Planets" as I read this piece. It's very descriptive.

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    Date: 8/26/2012 11:13:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Gustav Holst's "The Planets" is not something you read. You listen to it:
  1. Date: 8/25/2012 3:09:00 AM
    soup xx

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 2:58:00 PM
    so profound, such truth.

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 1:33:00 PM
    The condition sure brings a halt to the carefree lifestyle. You tell is with such painful truth Jag! How's my sweet friend, miss sending emails but they just won't go. Take care, always great when you visit and all the best in the contest. Love, Elizabeth

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 7:26:00 AM
    I agree with Terry ..... - Wish you luck in contest Jag - very good poem. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:56:00 AM
    jag, I just love this, good luck...David

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 5:13:00 AM
    oh so true Jag my friend.. totally relate to arthritis.. my hands are living proof luv.. had it since 27 from broken ankle playing football with my sons.. oh.. a wonderfil verse.. best wishes.. kudos..

  1. Date: 8/22/2012 4:00:00 AM
    Getting old is terrible (but the alternative is worse)... Great poem... Terry (& thanks for your kind words)