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Trembling Hearts

Cupped in my hands, against my breast,
A baby bird fell from it's nest.
Its' tiny body trembling there
With glistening eyes and fearful stare.
The heartbeat seemed to beat in time,
And twice as fast and loud as mine.
Its' first attempt at wing denied,
Now left my grasp at last to fly.
When at first you came to me
To hold your heart and comfort thee,
I felt that trembling close to you
Especially when our love was new,
Our breathing soft and interlaced,
Now cupped within my soft embrace.

Craig Cornish
Reposting, written in April 2012

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  1. Date: 4/25/2014 7:02:00 PM
    Marvelous. Congratulations on your win, sir. I am learning a lot at this commnunity.

  1. Date: 4/25/2014 1:50:00 AM
    Congratulations on your fine win Craig. hugs Jan x

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 8:43:00 PM
    Craig, this poem is why I want you to mentor me in poetry.. You have a gift and now, another win!

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 12:18:00 PM
    Congratulations on this deserving write. Simple and moving. RAY

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 11:26:00 AM
    Craig, this poem brought a flutter to my heart! beautiful...heart to heart. congrats on a worthy win. // paul

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 11:03:00 AM
    For some reason I thought I read this once before..I guess I never commented on it. There was no way I could compete with this one. lol You captured the essence of love in this write. The imagery is so real..Excellent entry choice and Congrats Craig!!!!

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 8:30:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Craig, well deserved

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 8:07:00 AM
    Very apt perspective. Congratulations on the win, craig

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 7:27:00 AM
    You certainly gave this one wings. I'm glad you reported this one so that I got to enjoy reading it. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 5:53:00 AM
    Beauty is you and the bird, Beautiful, Craig, are your word. Congratulations on your first place win in this contest... Verlena

  1. Date: 4/24/2014 1:29:00 AM
    Lovely love poem,,,,subtly romantic,,, great win on great poem Craig ! Congrats on ur win !

  1. Date: 4/23/2014 11:39:00 PM
    awesome sweet poem... Craig, congrats... Linda

  1. Date: 4/23/2014 9:57:00 PM
    This is such a tender and heartwarming write, Craig. Great rhyme and a smooth word flow, as well. Congrats on your first place win in my contest! Well deserved!

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 2:35:00 PM
    This is very sweet,, CONGRATS on your romantic win! ;-) ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 12:00:00 PM
    Congratulations Craig on your placement in P D 's contest enjoyed..' Joe..)

  1. Date: 6/1/2013 10:04:00 AM
    Craig, , CONGRATULATIONS :-)* Thank you for the nice and sweet romantic poem... pin points the watering passion thirst I seek. Always & Forever..... PD

  1. Date: 12/19/2012 2:18:00 PM
    This one was a work of art. Congratulations on the win.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 10:48:00 AM
    this one is so interesting, comparing the trembling heart of love to the bird that was allowed to fly. very nice and a unique love poem, Craig. Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 12/15/2012 5:12:00 AM
    Congratulations on your winning spot Craig de ja vu xx (can't spell lol)

  1. Date: 12/14/2012 9:40:00 PM
    Adorable. Many congrats for this win.