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To Charmaine


                                            in the sky
                                            from still dark clouds
                                            if sad, sun makes you shine
                                                  r                      a
                                             a                               i               
                                           h                                   n
                                          c                                     e

I hope her name is disyllabic : )


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  1. Date: 10/23/2010 4:26:00 AM
    What a lucky lady this woman was,i'm jealous for her. .but this seems a long time ago,i guess,so. .was. .

  1. Date: 5/2/2010 9:30:00 AM
    I had to go far back to see poems of yours I've not yet read. What a delight for charma. I need to write her again. I think I have not chatted with her in a while!! LUv, Andrea. thanks for always being so sweet!

  1. Date: 9/23/2009 3:22:00 PM
    very cool tribute!... jim

  1. Date: 8/16/2009 1:22:00 AM
    a beautiful tribute, and what a rainbow, God bless you from diane

  1. Date: 8/14/2009 11:05:00 PM
    like you needed another accolade for this piece. you continue to amaze and inspire.

  1. Date: 7/22/2009 7:39:00 AM
    Bro, this is a very nice tribute to Charmiane. I love it. Ernilando

  1. Date: 7/21/2009 3:34:00 AM
    As usual Ruben for creativity you"re host!great job. And thank U soooo much for comments on mine.God Bless,Prince

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 1:37:00 PM

  1. Date: 7/18/2009 12:36:00 PM
    My Brother Ruben, great write Charmaine is one of my favorite poets is Charmaine the rainbow?ALWAYS YOURS...Harry

  1. Date: 7/16/2009 7:17:00 AM
    hey whers my poem?:D

  1. Date: 7/13/2009 1:58:00 PM
    I think it is disyllabic. I think she goes by Charma but either way this is a very nice tribute. Cool shape too, I imagine a dark cloud up top and then her name looks like a rainbow. oh wait I'm not the first to figure that out huh...oh well.

  1. Date: 7/11/2009 9:44:00 PM
    Nice Cinqku, the message is beautiful...Raul

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 7:35:00 PM
    What a beautiful friend to cheer another. Char has such a sweet tender spirt. Great job Ruben

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 4:55:00 PM
    Its just perfect Ruben,>>James

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 7:25:00 AM
    What a nice gift. Thanks.

  1. Date: 7/10/2009 12:02:00 AM
    Lovely tribute Ruben.Rgds Brian & thanks for your welcome comments today.There can be more variations in the 'Western' English language style tanka which are generally more fluid, hence the cinquain and cinqku developments.Thanks for your interest.Have a good day

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 11:33:00 PM
    Very inventive visual Ruben.Thank you for your welcome blog comments today.Rgds Brian

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 9:06:00 PM
    thankyou for being always there and this coloured raibow makes me smile---thankyou from my heart Ruben,i am smiling,and this poem goes to my favs Rub--you are talented and this poem surprised me :),thanyou--charma

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 9:06:00 PM
    Great form, you are a "master"....Karla

  1. Date: 7/9/2009 8:54:00 PM
    Ruben, your poem should definatley put a smile back on her face, if not only your efforts, this is a lovely poem, and I am glad one of my poems could be there for you and offer you strength or hope. That is my goal with my poetry, and I am so happy to have been there for you my friend, Peace and love, ~Trudy~