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Written 20 may 2013

My faith is in you Lord
 trapped to this bed, I'm bored

How much longer shall I be still
 for I know this is by your will
I'm alone and at your mercy
 given up friends and family
My faith is struggling oh Lord
 I pray that you hear my call

I've been still, by not a choice of mine
 learning lessons through your will and time 

Patience is growing to an all time low
 lets get this operation done, lets go

I've learn't who I am and I do pray 
 so lets get moving, before I fade away....

Give me strength to handle the operation that awaits
 so that I may again see the sunlight on my face

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  1. Date: 5/22/2014 11:29:00 AM
    DENISE, Congratulations, on having your poem featured on the Poetry Soup's home page. Hope you are enjoying the exposure. Hugs & Love ~SKAT~

  1. Date: 5/18/2014 4:59:00 PM
    aww a very good poem, so heart touching, miracles do still happen today and healing still comes, its hard when people suffer and cant move, through strokes or one thing or another, i work in residential care and is so hard not to cry but have to stay professional and smile to make our residents feel better.

  1. Date: 6/24/2013 3:51:00 AM
    Denise, this is pretty good stuff, it is a plea to God, to get you off your bed and back into the world of light, love and family, you don't want to keep waiting, so God had better move his miracle for you, I like this writing it has a lot of positives for you. John

    Ginesi Avatar John Ginesi
    Date: 6/24/2013 3:53:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    I Forgot to rate you on your poem, it is a 6 which is pretty damn good.