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The thought of never having
The one I love the most
To miss the tender touch
Of whom I am engrossed

Through day and night I must confess
I think about you then
When I'm alone and oh so sad
My mind thinks of you again

The feeling that is here
Is one that I should hide
For you don't feel the same
We won't walk side by side

Date: July 24, 2012
Authors Note: The rhyme scheme is that of a Quatrain, but since there are three stanza's I'm unsure if it is considered one. I'll post it as free verse just in case. 

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  1. Date: 8/1/2012 5:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super win in Lisa's "One Silver Tear" contest Sheena. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 10:22:00 PM
    SHEENA., a wonderful CONGRATULATIONS in LISA'S' contest..... always~ PD

  1. Date: 7/29/2012 9:21:00 AM
    Congratulations Sheena, on a wonderful write and 3rd place win. I enjoyed the read~ Caryl

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 10:52:00 PM
    Congrats on your win with your heartfelt write! Love and Blessings

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 8:57:00 PM
    Thank you both very much!

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 9:20:00 AM
    Congrats on your win, Sheena! Well done. Love, Kim

  1. Date: 7/28/2012 4:15:00 AM
    Sheena, congrats on your win, excellent..David