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The Wayside Dancers

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The Wayside Dancers

When you pass by Sandra Bar,
You never miss
The wayside dancers,
At twilight that stinks rums.

Without ways
To bear the sweltering rays,
The tender hearts
Dive in to chilly liquors.

When a snake charmer plays
On his pipe, the serpent sways,
The sots too dance so,
Whose daily wages steep in rums.

The lean wives with their visages,
Cankered by sorrows,
Wait their heroes
Return as villains.

I know the sots in muddles,
Who long to  return to  the cradles,
As the mid sea thrown dogs
Look for the shores.


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  1. Date: 3/22/2012 6:12:00 PM
    Yike a sad write about the excesses of drink! Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 8:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Nette's "Let's Dance" contest Fab. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 3:22:00 AM
    Woot ....a great win here, Fabiyas...another true to life write also, right? Superb images!! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 3:09:00 AM
    FABIYAS congrats on your slendid win..David

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 5:10:00 PM
    this one is very unique. I really like it, Fabiyas. Big congrats in the contest.

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 3:27:00 PM
    Excellent poem Fab congrats on your 1st place win, hugs,vie

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 3:13:00 PM
    congrats on a stunning 1st place write; mesmerizing use of language - "twilight that stinks rums", "cankered by sorrows" - fantastic! :-)

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 2:19:00 PM
    what an extraordinary take on dance, fabiyas... you drew me in!...congrats on your win in my contest..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 12:09:00 PM
    congrats FABIYAS on a super first place win for this elegant expression in beautiful words luv..

  1. Date: 3/17/2012 11:59:00 AM
    LCongratulations on your win. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 12/8/2011 11:57:00 PM
    Hey I see you had gotten featured. A big belated congrats to you, Fabiyas. That is wonderful.

  1. Date: 9/21/2011 1:14:00 PM
    Congratulations in the contest of P. D. "Featured Poem of The Week" Fabiyas. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 5:15:00 PM

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 12:53:00 PM
    Congrats on your win. Kim

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 11:40:00 AM
    Wonderful Poem Fabiyas.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 8:33:00 AM
    Congratulations on the win in the contest of P.D. Fabiyas, Hello I am home (India)

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 3:51:00 AM
    A winning congratulations! CR

  1. Date: 9/17/2011 2:16:00 AM
    FMV,..Congratulations on your win, this is an amazing featured poem. Thank you so much for entering and sharing it with us. A super well done poem,, God bless,... LINDA

  1. Date: 11/29/2010 6:37:00 AM
    A well deserved featured poem you have here Fabiyas my friend. May you have many more. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/28/2010 5:34:00 PM
    Congrats FABIYAS on your featured poem this week on the Soup my friend.. a great one to share with us all today with luv..