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The Transformation

Sparkling fireworks inside his head, Disregarding love, inviting anger instead; Won't he get weary of so much pain, Taking it out on the world is insane. Transform slowly and surely mature, He'll find light in the night, I'm almost sure Finding his place where time reverses Musing the worlds small petty curses; Can't be realistic with a good attitude, Can't be alone without pure solitude A world without color, just black & white, How can he stand such a horrible sight? Some day he'll notice the small things in life And transform greatly without hate or strife.

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  1. Date: 6/28/2012 10:59:00 AM
    what a story and you tell it so well - JH

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 10:41:00 PM
    Dana 'lynn, This could be my story. The last two lines hit me the most. I am still striving to achieve those two lines. Thanks for putting into words, what I couldn't. I really like this poem and I am adding it to my 'fav poem list', because I can (selfishly) draw strength from it. Thank you for brightening my day. Well done. Congrats on making Debbie's winners' list...........S.Ronthorpe

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 8:43:00 PM
    congrats Dana'lunn on a terrific win for this magnificent entry on transformation theme luv.. well done..

  1. Date: 2/21/2012 11:13:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in ~Debbie Guzzi's~ "Transformation" contest Dana'lynn. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 11:24:00 AM
    Good afternoon.. Dana.. how are you? a very deep poem.. have a happy valentine days..pd

  1. Date: 2/11/2012 3:58:00 PM
    A wonderful poem. If only we could transform the people we love. Very sad to see someone suffering when they don't even realize. Blessings, Rhonda