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THE THOUGHTS ALIKE

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THE THOUGHTS ALIKE

In the greens, from the tree, 
Came the same fruits with the same sweet taste
Yet they thought of each other superior to the other
From each other’s eyes flared competition; 
Dwelling in pretence of likeness for each other
Secretly yearning for their freedom of speech;
Crouching in wait for their strike; 
Waiting in anticipation for their time
Swearing and cursing under silent breath
Never for once under estimating their opponents cleverness
For they know better than that
Tis better to keep a friendly fake face 
Than to make ones intention known
The secret ingredient of success? 
The element of surprise
To take the victim on, unaware
She never saw it coming; she never saw it explode
Hitting like that boosts the ego; sweet victory
Only hope it lasts; for the opponent won’t remain fallen
With a greater force she will rise and avenge
Unlike her, do have the upper hand and 
Rob her of her element of surprise
Or suffer worse fate
It becomes like a cycle; 
A cycle of score settling
It goes on and on, 
Till one surrenders victory to the other
That hardly happens though; 
For none wants to wear the face of defeat
It simply won’t happen!!!


 © Naa Takia, All Rights Reserved 2012

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  1. Date: 12/1/2012 1:35:00 PM
    Wow very powerful, why do we humans attack each other? It is the things about the other that are the same that we despise so much. Their weakness is our own.

    Nunoo Avatar Victoria Nunoo
    Date: 12/4/2012 5:05:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    very true Richard. Thanks for reading. :D
  1. Date: 11/26/2012 11:41:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you today Victoria. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. Hoping you find even more inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Thank you for sharing your writing with us. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 11/18/2012 7:21:00 PM
    Very deeply spoken!!! Really love this poem of yours!!! Regards INK-U-SCRIPT

    Nunoo Avatar Victoria Nunoo
    Date: 11/19/2012 1:18:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    Thanks for reading,I'm glad you love it...
  1. Date: 11/18/2012 6:34:00 AM
    So deep and true... well written piece... hugs Michael

    Nunoo Avatar Victoria Nunoo
    Date: 11/19/2012 1:19:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    aww, Big hugs Michael and thanks for reading
  1. Date: 11/17/2012 1:14:00 PM
    great write Victoria,so true

    Nunoo Avatar Victoria Nunoo
    Date: 11/17/2012 1:16:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    thanks richard, thanks for the read