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The things he hates most

Since he was a young boy
he has hated nothing.
Nothing but three things.


All that spinning makes him dizzy.

Childish things for childish people.

Why don't you use a clock like a normal person?

“Why the hatred?”
You may ask.

His father was a doll-maker.
And he made one every hour.

Copyright © Eliot Gilbert

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  1. Date: 3/23/2013 6:24:00 PM
    Eliot, Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week. Wishing you the best this new coming week. Take care :-) Linda

  1. Date: 3/21/2013 8:53:00 PM
    I like this very much! Its simple and elegant.

  1. Date: 3/18/2013 4:38:00 AM
    Very well done, hope you do well in the contest. Cheers. Rick

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:25:00 PM
    i like this! must be on the top of the contest=)