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The story of my life

The story of my life never seems right 
cause i've been there a thousand times 
and it always seems like night

Why does it seem like this why is it so dame hard
Cause i thought you already knew me and my heart
Youv been one in a million
now your just a number thats killen me inside

i cant take it anymore 
My hearts been broken once before
the worste of all is you knew that and you just dont care anymore 

so i'm closing this old chapter and ending my book.
i decided to forget it all get a new look
i'll be making the right choices, forgetting about you.
i'll be happier instead 
i'll get a new attitude, without you

So where am i now, what have i found
i found myself 
and this is my story, it feel like a fairytale
i just landed in wonder land without you
finally i can breath

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  1. Date: 1/17/2015 10:45:00 AM
    Melissa, style and tone is great, correct spelling, and this will be a touchdown. My friend, maybe you're looking in all the wrong places for love, stop looking! love will find you. Ken

  1. Date: 1/12/2015 8:46:00 AM
    Hi! Nice one. A short story within emotions. Best Regards, Bhavna

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 7:31:00 AM
    Beautiful story Melissa. GOOD!Welcome to you! - Love Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 4:46:00 AM
    A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Melissa. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. Read and comment on their's and they will return in kind. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love and blessing always, Carol

  1. Date: 12/13/2011 2:32:00 AM
    wow! I am taking a super deep breath here with you! A refreshing write for a do-over. Liked the reference to numbers and the chapter closing...Very sentimental and full of energy. Enjoyed. Gwendolen