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The Silence

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The Silence

I have this vision of you, a redeemer of my soul                                                                
I have longed for you for a whole eternity                                                                         
Now it seems that you aren't coming back                                                                         
The silence of your absence stretches on                                                                           
Like a vast desert, barren and lost                                                                                    
I feel the silence, it increases by the hour                                                                         
It hurts to know that you've moved on                                                                              
I have been your secret admirer for years                                                                         
I know you have been running away from me, unaware of my love                                     
I have been rewarded now with your silence                                                                     
Which is a broken heart and a numbed soul                                                                      
Full of pain....

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  1. Date: 12/25/2013 6:42:00 PM
    Heartfelt poem well written. well done. Pete.

  1. Date: 12/25/2013 10:06:00 AM
    Wow!Great poetry from you Priyanka.Love it.

  1. Date: 11/12/2013 12:17:00 PM
    You are so keen in pain...I have been rewarded now with your silence love the feelings.Well penned

  1. Date: 11/8/2013 5:28:00 PM
    Sounds like the Girl from Ipanema. "She passes but doesn't see". Time gives us few opportunities to act. Sometime it is too late. Your poem tells it all. Allan

  1. Date: 11/1/2013 5:35:00 AM
    seek an you will always find, the lover with the cute behind, fate can sometimes, yet be kind, eyes wide open ...don't be blind, just chill... great poem here mate...

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:31:00 AM
    Unrequited love ....ah I know the feeling ..quite haunting sad and full of feeling

  1. Date: 10/25/2013 4:03:00 AM
    - A painful, touching and well written poem - thank you. - oxox // Anne-Lise :)