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The sea-waves touch

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The sea-waves touch

The sea-waves touch your open palms;
along the shore, blue waters bid
when stormy sea henceforth becalms,
and tide engulfs what skies forbid.

When solemn eyes their oaths avow
and roses beckon on your dream,
reach out and find his drifting prow
aboard your trip's perpetual stream.

Cause thoughts, like boats, may drift amiss;
for those who lived in old realms,
eternal love's confession is,
the touch of sea, upon the palms.

Cause those beloved, forever pledge
since prior times,
and search those loves on skyline's edge
who kissed their eyes.

© G.V. 12.08.2013 All rights reserved
(Iambic tetrameter)
(first draft)

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  1. Date: 1/4/2015 1:11:00 PM
    An easy seven, Giorgio. Loved it. Thanks for sharing!

  1. Date: 12/31/2013 8:43:00 AM
    Truly magical, Giorgio. You make me miss the sea. My thoughts now drift towards sailboats and waves. Have a Happy New Year! -Faaiqah:)

  1. Date: 12/23/2013 12:42:00 PM
    What a joy to read this wintry Monday night in Scotland. You've penned a gem Giorgio. Happy Christmas to you.....

  1. Date: 12/16/2013 9:03:00 AM
    Wow! ........And I can touch beauty now and in in enchanting memory! Giorgio, your work has joined the ranks! 7 Chuck

  1. Date: 12/14/2013 7:59:00 AM
    Masterful. I try to write this way while you actually do. I adore its dreamlike flow and the seamless stitching of sea and sky, shore and ship, dream and touch, love and rose. A favorite.

  1. Date: 12/11/2013 4:38:00 PM
    Rereading this beauty'roses beckon on your dream ..nice!!and again..the touch of sea upon the palm..Enchantimg..The ending -Magnifying. Very beautiful..

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:16:00 AM
    this is so nice. I particularly loved the line "the touch of sea, upon the palms!"

  1. Date: 12/10/2013 12:06:00 AM
    I believe that some people are, what they call, "old souls". They seem to have a special knowledge of times gone by, and they recognize people that they knew in another life. This is a beautiful, beautiful poem, Giorgio!

  1. Date: 12/9/2013 7:16:00 AM
    The touch of sea upon the palms..Extremely beautiful.I love the thoughts between the words Giorgio.I have to favor this gem..Charm

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 8:11:00 PM
    Giorgio this is really beautiful...

  1. Date: 12/8/2013 4:40:00 AM
    Beautiful allegorical write, Giorgio

  1. Date: 12/7/2013 10:21:00 PM
    May they find what they are looking for :). A very nice write, Giorgio!