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The presto agitato of a Moonlight Sonata

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The presto agitato of a Moonlight Sonata

Listening to winters third movement
there was a prelude,
but not a proposition.
I, like a fiddlehead in spring waited
as a moonlight sonata
of snowflakes glistened in a blizzard;
firelight tangoed with shadows,
like a fantasy of glimmering fairies unfurling 
into a full concerto of blazing sound.
Smiling, I whistled along thinking of the robins in spring.

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  1. Date: 6/16/2015 3:52:00 PM
    Hello Raskin, really found the reflection of changing season and thoughts on the effects of such well worth reading..' enjoyed the visit:)

  1. Date: 12/20/2012 11:19:00 AM
    lovely pictures of fantasy all wrapped up in the Sonata. love, Kathy

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 7:35:00 PM
    I do like the comparisons in this one..Great work that you have composed..Thanks for stopping by ..Your kind review was uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 12/12/2012 5:08:00 PM
    Beautiful write Raskin :)

  1. Date: 11/29/2012 3:22:00 PM
    This is outstanding my friend! There is nothing more to say... bravo!

  1. Date: 11/28/2012 7:49:00 PM
    Raskin, Bravo my friend. What imagery you have painted with your words. Thank you also for your comment on my write. Rollo

  1. Date: 11/26/2012 6:12:00 PM
    such gorgeous language and magical imagery! bravo!