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The Path

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The Path

The Path ----------- Sound of the --- birch urged some tardy trav'ler, along the flowery path to drowsy nooks. Gleam'd the dark moat , and the castle walls droned ; Wind moan'd , disbranching a sliver of wood , `` `` `` For Giorgio Veneto's Contest : "Impress me with a Small Poem II !" Written by gautami phookan Motif : Nature / Spiritual

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  1. Date: 3/7/2014 1:46:00 AM
    Small is beautiful. Congrats, Gautami!!

  1. Date: 3/6/2014 8:09:00 PM
    I really like the format of this one, dear. How are you doing? I don't see you nearly enough so it was good to see you on the winners list and read your poem. Congrats.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 12:54:00 PM
    Well Woven!!Congrats on the win!!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 7:26:00 AM
    Very well written Gautami ! Congrats on great win!!

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 7:02:00 AM
    - Hi Gautami, congratulations on your fine nature winning poem in Giorgio A.V. contest ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:42:00 AM
    Dreamy images. Congrats on your win

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 6:14:00 AM
    Congrats on the worthy win Guatami.

  1. Date: 3/5/2014 5:07:00 AM
    Lovely poem. Congratulations on the fine win, gautami

  1. Date: 1/15/2014 6:48:00 PM
    enjoying this one again and the great formatting of it!

    Duggan Avatar Peter Duggan
    Date: 2/6/2014 3:31:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Loved this poem and the way you wrote it. It is very beautiful, Gautami, Well done, my friend...peter
  1. Date: 9/26/2013 4:12:00 AM
    the slow-motion feel of this drives me to a breaking edge, gautami... greeat stuff, no word wasted!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 9/25/2013 11:03:00 AM
    Very descriptive work..Enjoyed reading this one today..Work well presented..Thanks for the visit to my page..Your comments are uplifting..Sara

  1. Date: 9/24/2013 10:55:00 PM
    Lovely verse, written with personality and posted with confidence. Molto brava! 7! :) G.

  1. Date: 9/23/2013 12:08:00 PM
    This is poetry!Glad to read a new poem from you.

  1. Date: 9/22/2013 7:42:00 AM

  1. Date: 9/14/2013 1:24:00 AM
    great imagery, sweetie!!

  1. Date: 9/13/2013 9:15:00 PM
    Very attractive path picture penned, Gautami