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The Night

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The Night

                                                       the   night;
                                                   the   towers  
                                               sheltered    in    mist,
                               river  flows  silent  under  the  stone  bridge.

                                Heavenly  quiet  before  dawn,  the  earth
                                                is  resting  in
                                                      a  peaceful

                                                         so deep,  
                                                      in a hush   
                                                     water  ripples;
                              a  boat  rocks  gently,  the  bo'sun  asleep.

                          Covered  in  white  silk,  the  town  sleeps  in  the
                                               faint  glimmer  of
                                                      yellow  lamps
                                                          in   the  

                                               ~         ~         ~         ~

For Giorgio Veneto's Contest : "Impress me with a small Poem V!"

Motif : Romantic

Written by gautami phookan

(Old Poem)                                

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  1. Date: 3/21/2014 5:09:00 AM
    Beautiful...descriptive....such imagery. congrats on your win :) // paul

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 9:39:00 AM
    Very impressive piece... well done!! ..CONGRATULATIONS for winning the 1st PLACE in Giorgio's Contest!! ..big hugs!!! (^_^)

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 4:57:00 AM
    Well penned write and congratulations on the fine win, gautami

  1. Date: 3/20/2014 4:02:00 AM
    - Congratulations on your win in the contest sponsored by Giorgio A.V. - A wonderful win poem from you Gautami ! - oxox // Anne-Lise :)

  1. Date: 3/19/2014 3:08:00 PM
    Well penned & congratulations on your win Gautami. Verlena

  1. Date: 12/15/2011 3:02:00 PM
    Fine "shaoe" poem. Peace & blessings Matthew Anish

  1. Date: 7/1/2011 10:57:00 AM
    I read your comments, Gautami :) heehee I love your humor :D I replied in Chris' blog as well, & I am thinking maybe your name made him think that you are a guy? Most of the time, I confuse people as well they think I am a guy since my name sort of sounds like it's a guy's name--I am so happy I got it right that you are a woman :D and thanks for your inspiring comments in my haiku, my other haiku was my entry though... :) hugs to you :D

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    Date: 7/1/2011 10:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    btw I hope to see more writes from you-- happy to see you are back :D
  1. Date: 6/30/2011 1:13:00 PM
    dynamic artistry Gautami .. delicate but powerful descriptions in this engaging write my friend.. awesome as always luv.

  1. Date: 6/26/2011 12:29:00 PM
    saying Hi and thank you Gautami :) I hope to see new writes from you and thank you for passing by my poems :D enjoy your Sunday :D

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 8:05:00 AM
    Really good....good luck...........George

  1. Date: 6/25/2011 2:22:00 AM
    So beautiful, Gautami. I am down for the count as explained in my blog, but I was very touched by your message and want you to know how much I value your friendship. You're so a sweet, kind person and I'm blessed to call you my friend. Congratulations on your win in Chris's contest. Love you and your precious heart, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 1:43:00 PM
    Great Job; lovely poem!

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 12:35:00 PM
    Crikey, I didn't realise how many contest results I'd missed while co judging with Carolyn - please forgive hasty message - many congrats to you : )

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 11:29:00 AM
    Well, we finally made it through the renovations of this poem :D~I wanted this poem to be in the top half of my original tetractys contest. Thank you for entering this superb tetractys a second time~!

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 11:25:00 AM
    congrats on your win in the contest, this is a superb evocation of night time...I am always impressed with your work, there is something ethereal about it, just beautiful to read...

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 5:05:00 AM
    Super congratulations Gautami on your awesome win in Chris' contest :)

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 4:52:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Chris's "Precious Gem" contest Gautami. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 11:55:00 PM
    by the way, I had so many comments to catch up on in just two days of inactivity, it boggles my mind how long i have been here . YOu wrote me some really cute notes on my poems and I am sorry I didn't answer them all back. The one answer I have . I worked on my poems friday thru saturday. have a good week!

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 9:54:00 PM
    I'm so glad to see you finally got it right for him. It PAID off. Congratulations.

  1. Date: 6/20/2011 3:11:00 PM
    My congratulations on the win in the contest of chris, gautami