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The Moon Dust will not Fall Nevermore

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The Moon Dust will not Fall Nevermore


                                             At different times
                                             in separate beds
                                             we sleep to forget
                                             Sunset is sunrise
                                             and nobody cares

                                             There it's sunny
                                             and here it rains
                                             who needs rainbows
                                             if no one cares?

                                             The Moon dust 
                                             will not fall 




                                             That's that!
                                             Who cares?

                                             Just drowned coins
                                             a cracked glass
                                             feeble stars

                                             Where's the Moon dust?
                                             Where're the arrows?
                                             Where's the fairy?
                                             Where's our strong faith?

                                             A distance that drowns
                                             through forbidden dreams
                                             we wait for the Moon
                                             to sleep and forget
                                             and nobody cares!


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  1. Date: 12/5/2012 6:45:00 PM
    Awww that's too sad! We have to CARE for ourselves..we have to value ourselfs enough to cherish our own exsistance..BUCK-UP...hey I'd care if you weren't here REALLY I would! Light & Love

  1. Date: 12/5/2012 11:08:00 AM
    Rereading this beauty

  1. Date: 4/13/2012 5:01:00 PM
    I'm sure I've seen this one before, but like the moon, it just pulls me in again and again!

  1. Date: 4/4/2012 12:57:00 AM
    Its about wishes.....I love the feeble stars Ruben.......and the drowned coins!!!

  1. Date: 3/31/2012 10:27:00 PM
    Oh...Ruben. I know...this is awsome...going to fav's ...pure magic...big hug,love deb...good luck in the contest my friend :)

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 1:24:00 PM
    Love your presentation Ruben and your words, well done, best of luck in the contest, I sort of struggled with this challenge but did manage to get one done

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:08:00 AM
    oh.....and as you coined many moons ago Ruben (& I steal often!) to mine fav's!!!! and print a copy, very cool...

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 5:06:00 AM
    mannn......I understand this poem from my divorce 18yrs. ago....jimbo

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 3:32:00 AM
    WoW Ruben! Talk about Angst! Too often instead of facing our problems we tend to try to hide from them and hope, like Scarlett O'Hara that tomorrow will be a another day. Great job here. Good luck in the contest. God Bless and thanks so much for your kind words on 'Plainly Speaking'. JB

  1. Date: 3/23/2012 1:38:00 AM
    This is quite an intriguing write Ruben, love the title too. That "a cracked glass feeble stars" just stood out for me. Wishing you the best for the contest :) *hugs* Wilma

  1. Date: 3/21/2012 7:01:00 PM
    Oh wowowow~! Love it, love it! You made moon dust sooo personal, I adore this interpretation!! :) (ps....laughed out loud at your one word comment on a recent blog....nothing more needs said after that!!! Cheerio !!

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 9:52:00 PM
    oooww, i hope it does fall again. very well written and filled with emotions Ruben. i enjoy reading your poems today and thanks for stopping by ~.~

  1. Date: 3/20/2012 2:36:00 AM
    This really flowed great for me, I really like your first & last stanzas here and "Just drowned coins a cracked glass feeble stars"-- you've touched on pondering questions here-- sometimes it just feels that way-- I bet Catie will love this one! :)

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 10:45:00 PM
    Just coming here to say HIYA!!! Let me check in your oldies and see if I can quick find one i've never read!

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 6:03:00 PM
    Oh, Ruben, I know this sad poem comes straight from your heart. I too get the feeling nobody cares if I wake in the morning. This is an aweoe entry for the contest and you know I am always pulling for my dear friend to win! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 1:50:00 PM
    Sorry my friend I didn't mean to skip your question. I personally like the poets name on my contest entries because if there is a mistake I like to let them know and without a name it's more of a search. Hope that answers your question. Michael

    O. Avatar Ruben O.
    Date: 3/19/2012 8:57:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thank you, Michael. I guess it answer my question! : )
  1. Date: 3/19/2012 8:43:00 AM
    awesome Ruben, harry

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 5:34:00 AM
    heartfelt work Great writing!! did you write this on a sleepless night?

  1. Date: 3/19/2012 5:09:00 AM
    flowing like a moon river, ruben... love the dreamy feel of this verse... beautifully ecribed.. all the best and huggs!:)

  1. Date: 3/18/2012 11:55:00 PM
    who need rainbows if no one cares/we wait for the moon to sleep and forget-Heartwrenching poem Ruben..Very sentimental.. One can almost feel the moon dust be blown in nothingness..tmfs