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The Moon

Yesterday I woke up on the Moon. It was a complete surprise. I seemed able to breathe, 
although everything was dry. The light was unbearably sharp. I wished I had my 
sunglasses. My dog, Zelda, was with me. She was rolling around in the dust. I started to 
walk. My steps were more bounds. Zelda popped up from her bath and sailed into the air. 
She gave a yelp of surprise. When she landed she went tearing off toward some hills. Earth 
hung in the sky. It was big and colorful. The moon was glaring white and black. The black 
areas didn’t glare, but they were cold. After an hour or so we went home and had 
breakfast. When Sue woke up she asked where we walked. I told her the moon. She told 
me to shut-up and she turned on the TV.

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  1. Date: 4/28/2013 5:33:00 PM
    Hiram, a very nice and awesome poem. Congratulations with your Featured Poem of the week :-) Take care, and enjoy the new coming week. Always & Forever! HUGS **LINDA**

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 4:36:00 PM
    Hiram, I like your moon poem. Nice choice for a first post.. Stopping by to wish you a nice warm welcome to the Poetry Soup. Wishing you the best in your writings. I hope you find this community one of the best here on the net. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets, and myself? If you ever want or need feedback on any given poem, please feel free and look me up by clicking on my name anytime you see it.. Luv~*~SKAT

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:00:00 AM
    :) welcome to the Soup. Namaste. Rick