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The Monster you become

Yes, I am undoubtedly certain
There’s no need to hide on curtain
I am glad to say I finally moved on
And a smile on my face is drawn
Being happy right now isn’t hard
Coz feelings for you is totally discard
As I now start having my new life
All the great things is exceedingly rife
I got all the chance to explore
Things I never done with you before
All the things that happen in the past
Seemed like a movie and we’re the cast
A movie that don’t have a happy endings
Words and actions resort to hurt feelings
But as I face the sun’s bright smile
Bliss I’m having, surely isn’t for a while
I know this new beginning will continue
And I will have someone better than you
My eyes are tired of shedding a tear
Too exhausted of treating you so dear
So here I am now with a brave heart
Can stand and live alone as we depart
But this cheerful time of mine change
You become unexpectedly strange
I don’t know the right term to use
Your actions made me extremely confuse
I never thought that you’ll resort to this
Didn’t presume you’ll be doing things out of piss
All my hardship to get better again
Seemed to disappear right there and then
You start pissing me to the core
And in my system it leaves a painful sore
Once again, tears lead to bursting
I really hate that this is still happening
You feed my friends with such impression
Making them think I’m the worst person
You spread enormous lie
Lies I didn’t imagine my friends would buy
So miserable, that’s what you’ve caused me
That’s how monstrous you could be
How I wish I never knew you then
Maybe my life now would be heaven
I can’t think of a thing to do
You just don’t know what I’m going through
Monster – that’s the right term for you
For the hurting and untrue words you threw
Having you in my past is a disappointment
For I don’t deserve this kind of treatment
I know I can’t be that perfect girl you want
But you still remain annoyingly nonchalant
I can’t change the kind of monster you are now
But hurting me? A thing I can’t allow
I’ll be defending myself coz I’m right
You don’t have the chance of holding me tight
I won’t be that cry baby anymore
I swear I won’t let any words of you be ignore
I won’t let myself be defeated by you
A monster – whom I once told “ I love you”

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  1. Date: 10/22/2011 6:14:00 PM
    I LOVE THIS... YOU HAVE A LOT OF TALENT AND I AM SO LOOKING FORWARD TO READING MORE OF YOUR POETRY. feel free to message me when you get another one up if you want. take care. btw this can be considered a "couplet" js. and I understand this poem lots because my last boyfriend was a sociopath. fun stuff bro.

    amacio Avatar precious angelica amacio
    Date: 10/25/2011 7:49:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    hehehe..dont know what to say bout your coment :)) sure i'll mesage you if i have a new poem :)) hope we dont have a boyfriend like this again hahaha
  1. Date: 10/7/2011 1:21:00 PM
    what a deeply personal poem i am glad you had the courage to share it P.d.

    amacio Avatar precious angelica amacio
    Date: 10/7/2011 6:23:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    yeah...finally i got to came out from thst cry baby moments of damn tired of his nonsense acts..
  1. Date: 10/7/2011 12:40:00 PM
    ahhh love that old double edged sword..GOOD for you..Light & Love

    amacio Avatar precious angelica amacio
    Date: 10/7/2011 6:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry to be strong for myself :)