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The Fast Lane

Cruisin' in the fast lane, all life long.
No idea where I have been,
Here and there but don't know when.
Where did I go wrong,
Marching to this crazy song.
A paper bag, a pint of gin,
Cruisin' in the fast lane.
Not sure where I belong,
But there I, with sheepish grin,
Blinded by the spin I'm in,
Swingin' within the throng,
Cruisin' in the fast lane...

This form is Rondine for Nette's contest

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  1. Date: 4/22/2014 12:44:00 PM
    Good write Craig! Of course, you can always change lane :) congrats on win. // paul

  1. Date: 4/22/2014 5:30:00 AM
    Wonderful write Craig,,,no match,,,, Congrats on great win

  1. Date: 4/21/2014 9:59:00 PM
    HELLO CRAIG , Congratulations, AWESOME POEM:) Thank you so much for taking your time in supporting my contest... Always & Forever *Linda

  1. Date: 1/4/2013 8:22:00 PM
    can't seem to find a poem to see of yours not even on this back page! but I am remembering this poem. I had not noticed before it is rondeau!! How unusual and clever to make it in six syllable lines!

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    Date: 5/17/2014 9:58:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    This was a Rondine for Nette's contest---I will note that cuz I thought the same---not a Rondeau--never wrote one AD--make that your next contest!
  1. Date: 8/6/2012 8:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win. A great example of a rondine.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 11:20:00 PM
    Congrats on your well deserved win.

  1. Date: 8/2/2012 6:49:00 PM
    Congratulations on your first place win. Great going. Love, Joyce

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:55:00 PM
    Craig, ;-) congratulations with your awesome win in Nette's,, traffic contest... xox~PD

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:43:00 PM
    Congratulations on your well deserved win in Nette's "The Traffic Of Life" contest Craig. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:39:00 PM
    Very nice!!Congrats Craig on your big win!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 3:10:00 PM
    Craig congrats on your win..a well deserved win...David

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 11:24:00 AM
    Love it! Congrats! fav. line: Blinded by the spin I'm in. :) Tanya

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 10:58:00 AM
    I do hope you got out of that lane NOW! ;)Congrad's on your fine write winning! Light & Love

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:51:00 AM
    congratulations on your win!

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 9:37:00 AM
    Congrats, Craig! Just AWESOME. Thumbs way up to Nette for selecting this as first place. :-) Happy golfing! Cyndi (who is out and about to with family most days. Sun and silliness, picnics and pollywogs. HUGS

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:44:00 AM
    Congrats Craig on your 1st place win, love vie

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:43:00 AM
    Congrats my friend..Ive been on a cruise or 2 of my I just love this. BG

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 8:19:00 AM
    " a paper bag, a pint of gin,"... so crisp the image, craig... big cheers for a top win in my contest!..:) huggs

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:45:00 AM
    Congrats on your awesome first place win, Craig!! Love and Blessings

  1. Date: 8/1/2012 7:37:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Craig xx