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The Coldest Dream

Words as smooth as melting ice, And as cold as cold can be . . . To hear them only one more time Would surely be the death of me. The night-mares surface once again, But from where inside my mind? Few moments pass when he occurs In winding headaches so unkind. Nights have passed without deep slumber, And nights have passed with deepest rest, But whether I find sleep, or not, I find the nights without him best.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 7/10/2012 12:39:00 AM
this poem is written from the depths of your soul. this poem is well written and I wish you all the best - JH
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Date: 3/22/2012 6:47:00 AM
Your words so smoother, soothe always my conscious mind. I'd sure am curious to your process.
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Date: 3/18/2012 12:16:00 PM
Sometimes it seems like the nightmares never go away.
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Date: 3/14/2012 7:33:00 AM
Good morning ;-) dana i love this poem very much especially the ending line , thank you for sharing your wonderful poem. Have yourself a good one*always~pd"
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Date: 3/14/2012 1:17:00 AM
Wonderful verse. I love the strength and resiliency it conveys. Thanks for sharing. Blessings, Rhonda
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Date: 3/13/2012 9:52:00 PM
Keep writing, Dana'lynn. This one says a lot about inner strength.
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