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The Christmas Angel

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The Christmas Angel

Follow closely don't fall behind,
What we are about to do will blow your mind.
I hear your heart pounding,
As the corner we are rounding.

I see the building just up the way,
I have been here everyday.
Looking and noting all that is done,
For I knew this day would come.

I open the door and we are in,
Now all the fun will begin.
Stand behind me and now we wait,
Until she comes home to her fate.

I hear the keys in the door,
Be patient now she comes across the floor,
Sits down her bag and pulls off her shoes,
See I told you we left no clues.

She is sitting down with wine,
She doesn't know it's her time.
I watch and anticipate my next move,
I have something to prove.

I creep up slowly with my knife,
I have waited for this all my life,
I slide it silently across her throat,
This is what my life I do devote,

Don't act scared now that she's dead,
You wanted to watch deep in your head.
Your knew what I came to do,
Your still reading to get a closer view.

I prop her head under the Christmas tree,
Forever my Christmas Angel she will be.
Now lets leave before we are noticed,
I have achieved today's focus. 

Now see that wasn't so bad,
The best night you've ever had.
Unless you want the same fate,
Never mention this night's date.

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  1. Date: 4/15/2009 3:48:00 PM
    This is very very dark and all so frightening but what other can I expect my sister to write? I love it... Keep it up:-)

  1. Date: 4/14/2009 6:02:00 AM
    ...You knew what I came to do. Fascinating H Couplet poetry. All the best.

  1. Date: 4/13/2009 1:01:00 PM
    oh how dark, but a good way of showing others not to go on dates alone or in secluded areas where such things can happen, there are real peopel out in the world that would do the things you wrote a great word of warning to those who go out alone or walk home alone at night, don't do it, anyone can be hanging around, God bless from diane