Submit Your Poems
Get Your Premium Membership


Quote of the Day

Quote Left"The harder you work, the luckier you get."Quote Right

by Gary Player

  |  Comment

The camera, the laptop and the car

Erin Nash Avatar  Send Soup Mail  Block poet from commenting on your poetry

Below is the poem entitled The camera, the laptop and the car which was written by poet Erin Nash. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

Read Poems by Erin Nash

Best Erin Nash Poems

+ Fav Poet

The camera, the laptop and the car

Thanking anyone profusely doesn’t seem to be enough
What would you like me to do?
Kiss your feet
Catch hell for you
Return your underwear
Or paint your walls blue.

Ungratefulness consumes the fortunate
But hypocrites like to think otherwise
I’m the dartboard sitting next to you
“You’re ungrateful in everything you do”.

Your insecurities label me as spoilt
“Oh look at what you have:
A camera, a laptop and a car
Unappreciative is what you are”.

You think I haven’t worked for my things
You have no right to judge me
Walk a mile in my “ungrateful” shoes
And it might give you some kind of clue.

Every gift comes with strings attached
So this time, what’s the catch?
Your issues with yourself are not my problem
Everyone’s a little ungrateful
So count yourself in.

Post Comments

Please Login to post a comment
  1. Date: 12/30/2011 2:33:00 AM
    well written Erin,thank you for sharing it. HAPPY NEW YEAR TO YOU ! OXOX hugs from Anne-Lise

  1. Date: 12/24/2011 2:27:00 AM
    This one sizzles, Erin, well done..exciting stuff..write on..