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The Bamboo Tunes and a Cat Eyed Maid

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The Bamboo Tunes and a Cat Eyed Maid

In the murmuring evenings,
A cat eyed maid, worn the ear-rings,
Stands by the bamboo thickets,
Putting down her water pots.

The bamboos sing and sway,
And the tired path becomes gay.
The bamboo emotions always alter ;
The unnamed tunes cease never.

Her bamboo throes resound
In the gloomy wind.
The melodies of the earth shower
On her soul that does hover.

The finger tip of the wind brings
Sweet tunes from the bamboo strings.
The music enters her inner grove,
Where the forlorn dreams rove.

The cuddled bamboos swing and say
What the lovers failed to say.
The bamboos that swing
Tune her hope with a wing.


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  1. Date: 10/3/2011 2:19:00 PM
    And the rhythm keeps the dreams alive. Very nice thoughts her. Fabiyas, a big congratulations on your win in Nancy's contest~!

  1. Date: 10/3/2011 7:17:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win Fabiyas. I received your soupmail and I will try. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 8:36:00 PM
    Congratulations on your awesome win with this wonderful write!!!!!!!!!!====Lori

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 6:32:00 PM
    Congrats Fabiyas on fantastic fifth place win with dynamic words of poetic art my friend..luv..

  1. Date: 10/2/2011 2:12:00 PM
    Another awesome write, Fabiyas.. am quite sure I never catch all of the depth of meaning in yours, but they always grab me and keep me reading and oohing and ahhing, over and over. Thanks once again, my friend. Namaste~N

  1. Date: 8/30/2011 9:20:00 AM
    I love these images, Fabiyas, of a cat eyed girl and the swaying bamboos! soupmail.

  1. Date: 7/25/2011 1:24:00 AM
    Very interesting images you have here, Fabiyas-- I could almost picture this in mind--enjoyed this :) and thank you for all your encouraging comments :D

  1. Date: 5/1/2011 5:39:00 AM
    I always enjoy the imagery of Kerala in your poem smelling good, Fabiyas.

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 7:48:00 PM
    F.M.V.,:-) nice its great how they can express in better ways.. than some of us.. enjoyed..p.d.

  1. Date: 4/30/2011 5:58:00 AM
    Beautiful imagery FABIYAS and such graceful lines in describing the girl and the favorite things are made of bamboo.. the music enters her inner grove.. fantastic line luv.. so good to see u you here my friend.. thankxx for your sweet critique of my contest entry ..happy weekend..