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Tea For Two

I love to watch the tilt of your tender-tipped fingers
cupping the teacup's rounded heat,

the way you would gently cup my breasts,
your hands coiled lovingly around their warmth.

The roil of boiling water, the fluid swirl
of aromatic amber flowing over delicate flowers

as spiralling steam scents the room sensual,
rose-redolent and perfumed with jasmine flowers.

Lustrous light turns the day liquid: our private gilded hour.
Lemon sunlight slivers sharpen our eyes to each other.

Your fingers move with practised, deft fluidity,
absently caressing the chintzy china;

the air heavy with heady scents of the orient,
a tingling-brisk kiss of bergamot upon your lips.

I watch you lingering, filtering the fragrant leaves,
your fingers frisking the fragile porcelain,

florid and swelling with heat;
your lips dipping to sip sugared gold.

Copyright © Charlotte Jade Puddifoot

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  1. Date: 3/24/2013 1:49:00 AM
    I love the tea cup's rounded heat, florid and swelling, and its sugared gold;) Jag

  1. Date: 3/23/2013 9:24:00 AM
    beautiful poem, well written. In such a windy and snowy day, reading this piece just completes my relaxation. What a poem!

  1. Date: 8/8/2012 9:26:00 AM
    Sorry I can't mail on my mobil or get my kiss. I'll get it later. Got my job back. John oxox

  1. Date: 7/9/2012 5:55:00 PM
    Your eroticism is subtle, but telling. One cannot help liking it. You also seem to be the dominant mistress of alliteration. The further I go into your work, the more taken I am.

  1. Date: 2/22/2012 11:18:00 PM
    and I see this beauty DID win. Awesome and congratulations.

  1. Date: 2/12/2012 2:09:00 AM
    CHARLOTTE,, stopping by to wish you a SWEET VALENTINE.. AND A WONDERFUL , congratulations... ON your wonderful win In this awesome contest. Enjoyed ;-) . have yourself a wonderful valentines. @lways & @lways *xox~PD

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 10:46:00 PM
    okay, so you lead me on, charlotte.. teasing!... congrats on your win in my contest!:) huggs

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 12:04:00 PM
    Awesome write. Congrats on your win in Nette's contest.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 11:45:00 AM
    A belated congratulations on your placement in Nette's "Sexy" contest Charlotte. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 11:43:00 AM
    Very good poem indeed.Congrats on your win.

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 9:52:00 AM
    I love this poem, Charlotte,...your unique description comparing tea in a cup to it so much!! Nicely done !! (I would put this higher)....Congratulations!

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 8:47:00 AM
    congrats Charlotte on another exciting win for this sexy submission.. great title luv..

  1. Date: 2/10/2012 7:56:00 AM
    Congratulations Charlotte xx

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 10:30:00 PM
    Okay, you made tea hot. I mean really hot. Charlotte, this is rich! loved private guilded hour. Sugared gold... also really resonates. I've been meaning to stop by for days. It's 12:30 at night and I'm so sleepy I'm dizzy, but I had to say, thank you for all your kind comments. I shook when you compared my free verse to Sylvia's, as I know that like myself you are an honest poet. You made my day, and what you shared brought me a new understanding, too. Back to you, this should place high! xox

  1. Date: 2/9/2012 9:09:00 AM
    Wow, Charlotte! You sure took tea to a different level of sexy here! You just made me see tea in a whole new different light :) I sure do hope this places high, like what Andrea says! :D Sensual and masterfully written! :) and thank you again for passing by my poems with such uplifting comments and congrats on all your wins, you sure are one talented writer!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 9:02:00 PM
    AWESOME, Charlotte. I just know this one is going to get a TOP spot. About the sexiest thing I 've seen yet. Just what Nette ordered. Too bad I didn't think of something like this. I honestly could not think of "objects" to talk sexy about but the cup of tea is perfect!!!

  1. Date: 2/6/2012 5:09:00 PM
    coughing hurts all my ribs. can't concentrate.