"The harder you work, the luckier you get."
Below is the poem entitled tanka which was written by poet
MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.
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she asks the bright star
to come closer, pretty please
with breath that fogs glass
the old window pane rattles
while a draft shifts a ringlet