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Take a break 2

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Take a break 2

sharing the moment 
the serenity of space 
the light of a flame

©Ellie Daphne van stralen 2012

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  1. Date: 11/7/2012 8:49:00 AM
    Reads like a winner if for a contest..Great visual that you have perfectly described..Sara

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/7/2012 9:00:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY for the comment and its content - coming from an college - who has written so many beautiful Haiku's - makes the content even more valuable. TY so much. Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/5/2012 3:52:00 PM
    beautiful, Ellie. I had forgotten to see one of your poems so I am in a hurry and thought I'd see this one before going off.I hope you will leave comments for others' poems. then you will have many poets reading your gems!

    Wouterse Avatar Elly Wouterse
    Date: 11/6/2012 1:46:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    TY so much Andrea for taking the time to comment .......... will try to give attention and time to your advice. Greetings from the Netherlands. Ellie Daphne
  1. Date: 11/4/2012 12:09:00 AM
    Ellie, wow...i love the scenery ... xox~pd