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Sweet Inspiration

As if the words beg to float from my throat, But only spill with the ink of my pen; Only with nature's embrace and sweet coat Do I feel truth form in words and begin. Solitary confinement- I'll find peace; Only within, I can feel the soft hum . . With each stroke, and spill, a gentle release To nature's sweet music, pluck, and soft strum. Nature shall comfort, wherever I go; No matter the warm breeze, or the cold bite. . Caressed by nature, rocking to and fro' While I admire each beautiful sight. So now that no one's here to inspire love, I'll find it around, within, and above.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 1/25/2012 4:53:00 AM
Your sonnets are beautiful, and a credit to you and your caring ways. harry
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Date: 1/23/2012 4:12:00 AM
Lovely written Dana,emotion in every line.- oxox love Anne-Lise
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Date: 1/22/2012 8:54:00 PM
This is a mesmerizing sonnet, and one that gives my heart lift. Thank you for penning this.
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Date: 1/22/2012 7:18:00 PM
Dana 'Lynn Smiths ..... to quiet those words within me still, to sidestep duck, don't have the will, your verse is for the writing, strum pluck on the exciting, and flows the ever quill, of Sweet Inspiration, igniting, till. the bloody writing....
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Date: 1/22/2012 4:14:00 PM
What a great write, full of emotion, and descriptiveness! Your imagery is so vivid I feel exactly what it is your are describing! I love your poem completely and I hope to read more of your works in the future! Awesome Job!!
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Date: 1/22/2012 3:37:00 PM
A very nice example of a sonnet. Well written with great descriptiveness and rhyming.
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Date: 1/22/2012 3:28:00 PM
You are such a lovely poet, your words flow so beautifully! You are special! Thank you inspiring us to see love around, within and above. Yes Dana'lynn it is everwhere if we only look for it! Hugs Lizzie
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