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Below is the poem entitled SWEET DREAM which was written by poet Cyndi MacMillan. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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When fate decides to bring you love that lasts
your heart whispers that you’re finally home,
Before and after, a joyful contrast,
Hands now entwine and open arms welcome.

Days of delight linger in just one glance,
Nights are brighter, a first star kept its word,
And like magic two minds begin a romance
with tender talk and a silence that’s heard.

A couple will be joined, fate has its way,
Bride and groom will soon be husband and wife,
This moment holds gifts, one for each of their days,
Spoken vows and a kiss start a new life.

See her smile at him, then watch his eyes gleam
for they were wed long ago in a sweet dream.

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  1. Date: 10/10/2012 11:23:00 PM

  1. Date: 10/3/2012 7:51:00 PM
    I love the part about gifts that a husband and wife recieve and they are joined and what the future holds, Love this, congrats on your win, love debra

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 3:00:00 PM
    This is sweet and awesome rhyming, Cyndi. Congrats on a well deserved win.

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 9:17:00 AM
    Congratulations Cyndi xx

  1. Date: 10/1/2012 6:22:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in Janette's "When Fate Decides" contest Cyndi. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 7:31:00 PM
    Wonderful wrap up in the last two lines the hardest part of a sonnet [you ole sonneteer!] Congrad's on your win Light & Love

  1. Date: 9/30/2012 1:45:00 PM
    A tender sonnet to be read at the nuptials. Congratulations on your winning poem.

  1. Date: 9/13/2012 7:06:00 PM
    Love this poem, especially the part of about being wed long ago in a sweet dream, very beautiful, love debra

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 1:08:00 PM
    Beautiful verse - I was mesmerized by the wisdom and the feel of it! (: Thanks for sharing. Always, Laura

  1. Date: 9/12/2012 1:05:00 AM
    Oh, so good. Especially verse 2, such good flow and cognition. soup mail. Charles