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Subliminal-Chiasmus

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                          In any contest, judge with intelligence 
                                            or the intelligence's Judge will be contested.








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  1. Date: 1/16/2014 12:25:00 AM
    I like it this way better: "In any contest, judge with intelligence / or the Judge's intelligence will be contested." Wotcha think?

  1. Date: 3/29/2012 7:05:00 PM
    Hi, Ruben.. first i want to thank you for all your comments, ..(when you do stop by). i hope this means you will stick around.. and not leave any more... if you do..it's none of my bizz!.. anyways..Congratulations with your wonderful win.. in David's contest..xox~PD

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 10:35:00 AM
    Congrats on your win.......George

  1. Date: 3/28/2012 7:24:00 AM
    Congratulations on your win in David's "Chiasmus" contest Ruben. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 8:31:00 PM
    Way to go, Ruben. Big congrats on your awesome win!

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 7:34:00 PM
    The title grabbed me first! Hey, Ruben...u got some serious wisdom woven in this verse! Congrats! A wonderful win! Love, Gwendolen

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 6:05:00 PM
    Couldn't di it think forward then back??Makes you think hmmmm. Congrad's Light & Love

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 4:52:00 PM
    Congratulations Ruben!!! Looks like the message was heard...lol ;) loved it!!! well deserved win my friend...big hug,love~deb

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 4:13:00 PM
    Hello Number 3!! Haven't we met somewhere like this before?? Kuddos from your buddy, Number 4 !! ps...great job!! :)

  1. Date: 3/27/2012 4:00:00 PM
    congrats Ruben on a wonderful win for these exceptional words luv.. awesome ..

  1. Date: 3/14/2012 12:19:00 PM
    THIS IS HOT....Brilliantly said!

  1. Date: 3/12/2012 6:59:00 AM
    like this, Ruben, different and such wisdom, really makes one think. good luck. harry

  1. Date: 3/11/2012 1:39:00 AM
    Wise words.. form the Wise Owl :)...

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 7:59:00 PM
    enjoyed!! O., glad to see you here again!!

  1. Date: 3/9/2012 12:41:00 PM
    Ruben...it's good to see you posting again. this is wonderful...good luck in the contest and thanks for the comments....Marty

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 2:29:00 PM
    oh how creative Ruben.. surely a winning piece for David luv.. much luck .. will think on these words myself .. oh..

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 12:30:00 PM
    Yes, I see how you did it, Ruben. Very nicely done from you. I like how you used contest as a noun and then as a verb. and reversing the two words judge and intelligence! Good luck in the contest. Mine I think is the last one I will ever be doing!!!

  1. Date: 3/8/2012 12:09:00 PM
    Wise words from you Ruben, good luck in the contest, love,vie