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Stoned Hearts

The heart pounds as his knuckles touch the door,
ink bleeds, making his apology complete. 
Nobody’s home so he leaves bouquet on wooden floor;
a cloud of unanswered questions as footsteps retreat
Curtains part, as do hearts that never again meet.


For Rick’s  5 ~ 8 Line Poetry / Any Theme :)

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  1. Date: 7/23/2013 9:04:00 PM
    Stopping by to say hi, yes.. I'd seen your happy smiles on a blog.. nice to see you here... by the way this is a very sad poem... i don't think I'd be able to walk away from unanswered questions.. it's very hard.. we women want answers... knowing it is over.. isn't that crazy... anyways.. Hugs Nikko,.. I wrote a poem about (HANDS)...when you have time or you are on the soup... please read it out loud... LOL, twice... then tell me if you like it... love love.. PD

  1. Date: 12/20/2011 4:57:00 PM
    Nikko, wow, this is REALLY great. I had not seen it before! Great title for what I imagine it to be about. WAs reading the comments way below and I am not sure they understood it right. I don't think he had abused her.I think they just had a falling out and she does not want to see him again, so she is hiding behind the curtains while he is knocking. Did I get it right or WAS there a more sinister scenario. Anyway, Congrats on your win, and I hope your mom is feeling ok. Luv, Andrea

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 12:07:00 PM
    Hi! friend, congrats on your win, enjoying. bl

  1. Date: 12/19/2011 5:47:00 AM
    Congratulations on your super placement in ^Rick's "5~8 Line Poetry" contest Nikko. Love, Carol

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 4:56:00 PM
    Congratulation. Well written x

  1. Date: 12/18/2011 3:19:00 PM
    ohhh LOVE it! so real, so raw! yet powerful Congrad's Happy Holy Days

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 4:03:00 PM
    a darling write indeed. sad yet ever so sweet! emotion excellently captured in every line..gud luck in the contest! Maryam*

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 3:35:00 PM
    Absolutely a winner, Nikko! And afterall, what else is there to say when all has already been said? So well written! My best wishes for this holy season. This I will fav.! Love, Annalise

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 11:40:00 AM
    Wow, this is sad but so beautifully written, Nikko. I know Rick will love it as much as I do. Winning wishes for you! Merry Christmas. Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 11:33:00 AM
    a scary tale of abuse..all too true..I'm glad she will "never again meet" wishes for the contest and happy holidays Nikko!,Deb

  1. Date: 12/17/2011 10:52:00 AM
    interesting poem, Nikko! Was she hiding from him? Happy Holidays! Catie :)

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    Date: 12/17/2011 11:13:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks for dropping by, Catie :)-- yes, she hid from him, refusing to take him back-- happy holidays to you, too! :D