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Star Seeds

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Star Seeds

Skin on skin. Breath on breath. Two souls entwine, weaving into one pulsating rhythm. Give and take. Enveloped penetration- moisture dampens climactic, rubbing shock. Slow down pace, synchronize the push and pull of an engorged, dilated harvest moon. She rides the lightning; loud thunder clashes within his veins, as their thoughts fuse and merge. Tides crash on the edge of orgasmic bloom, but tantric elevation reigns them in. Sensation spirals beyond simple play- thoughts unravel, lifting up to the stars. Here, a soul is then plucked from the heavens, planted within a womb of earth and fire, as the dam breaks, finally succumbing to a release of passion and the flood.

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  1. Date: 4/20/2012 6:52:00 AM
    This is an awesome tetractys form of poetry here..smh..knowing it gets better.

  1. Date: 8/2/2011 10:12:00 AM
    Very hot poem Chris... erotic without vulgarity, enjoyed it immensely.

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 3:53:00 PM
    Amazing Chris, now that is poetry, I just love your "tet" what a fine example and thanks for your kind words on my poetry~~

  1. Date: 6/21/2011 1:01:00 PM
    well, I read this one before chris and it blew me away to such a degree that I failed to comment! truly inspired writing, mysticism and eroticism, this poem has it all...many thanks for my high placement in your contest and your kind words on my work, I enjoy your poetry very much too, you bring such originality to everything you write :-)

  1. Date: 6/18/2011 9:41:00 PM
    wow, conception never sounded better, Chris. this is an amazing example of the poetry you wanted us to write. I am also happily amazed I won first place from you. Knowing I write usually rhymes and you are more drawn to free verse. But the forms like this one or like etheree really help guide me to write in a controlled free verse style. Thanks, Chris,for your comment on Joy, and again, I really enjoyed this write of yours. It IS sincerely one of your best!!(enter it in Soup contest)

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 5:59:00 PM
    Wow, Chris! Now you owe me a cold shower. My heart is literally racing after reading this poem. Passion reigns among the star seeds! Love, Carolyn

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:15:00 PM
    WOW! THIS WAS LIKE WOW! CHRIS.~~ and now this is one of your best poems,,, and that is because i truly enjoy lots of your poetry... secretly or not... i do read... take care,..p.d.

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 4:12:00 PM
    IT WILLL BE THERE WAITING 4 YOU ... ONCE YOU GET RID OF YOUR HANG OVER... LOL... START.... LOL.. BYE

  1. Date: 6/17/2011 3:01:00 PM
    oh, chris... i am reminded of my past contest that was a longer version of the etheree and tetractys; so brilliantly done with poetic allusions to sensuality.. oh, your favorite theme, lol..j/kidding!... thanks for your comments on my entry for PD.. holy omikes!! asked me for a 35-line dramatic monolgue.. categories were slam, reality and microbiology... whew!!more later, mr. metrosexual guy!:) huggs

  1. Date: 6/16/2011 10:10:00 AM
    Explosion of the senses or should I say seeds Chris??? Really love the title you decided on, could not help but smile from the start lol :-)

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 11:53:00 PM
    just Amazing......

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 11:26:00 PM
    I'm loving this kind of poetry,a sensual explosion,great post Chris,awesome!

  1. Date: 6/15/2011 11:20:00 PM
    Whoo-wee, what a searing & passionate write this is, Chris-- like I said, too bad you can't enter your own contest! Sending you soupmail after this...

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    Date: 6/15/2011 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh btw, really like your title for this too!
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    Date: 6/15/2011 11:21:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry


    oh btw, really like your title for this too!