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misty rainfall brushes her skirt tipsy,
waking evening through silver hues
as quenched tresses drip of moonlight
gale… and so, after the slide
of downpour twirling a fluid rush,
she graces moon’s face
into gloss of springtime passion and calm…
my thrill races on moist grasses,
as springtime drizzle kisses my cheeks tastier
than cherry wine of this season
and in gradual hush,
she disappears like a chaste virgin.

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  1. Date: 4/22/2013 2:42:00 PM
    Welcome back, nette. You are like a spring shower :-) Lovely write :-)

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:49:00 PM
    This would most certainly have earned my second 1st place spot my friend! I only gave one 1st place spot but this one would have made me give two 1st place spots! Wow, the grace of this springtime shower is very incredible, I loved reading this amazing poem this afternoon! You written a delightful piece here Nette, what an outstanding poem, Excellent Work!!

  1. Date: 4/21/2013 3:49:00 PM
    Soup Mail

  1. Date: 4/18/2013 1:42:00 PM
    Hummm!! Finally! You came home past your curfue, young lady!! ... but only 5 months late!! Go to your room --->

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    Date: 4/18/2013 1:43:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Me dont like your absence. > : - (
  1. Date: 4/17/2013 7:46:00 AM
    Another fantastic poem my dear friend Nette! REading your poems today from here means I came late ;)) but, I'm really so excited and thankful that you're back. My work is still up to 27th but the opening of 1st sem. is on May 6. We've a short vacation but I'll try to go home after summer class, hoping for a promo ticket at Clark. Can you send me your phone # so I can call you if I can go home & have time to drop by in Mla? Thank you so much! missing you, Leonora

  1. Date: 4/17/2013 2:38:00 AM
    such an intensely beautiful write from you Nette..glad you are have been missed...luv,Deb

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:07:00 PM
    It's wonderful to be reading you again, Nette. Good to see you're back after a leave of absence, as am I. Well done with this gem and good luck in the contest. :)

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 10:55:00 AM
    A pleasure to see you here again. I recently came back myself. :) These lines are fantastically intense. Quite the rush!

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 5:18:00 AM
    Whew, what a relief! You're back...I hope all is well? - Tim

  1. Date: 4/16/2013 2:00:00 AM
    Excellent. Well penned. Great imagery write. Enjoyed. Tfs

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:23:00 PM
    Oh, the word grates, so perfect, great imagery. Sent you soup mail! I can't even begin to tell you how happy and relieved I am. xoxxoxox Cyndi

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 10:09:00 PM
    You have cast a spell with your words, this is lovely. Good luck with the contest.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 8:11:00 PM
    I too love those showers, they bring birds back home and the dqays are exciting with flowers. Just the snow gone is such a treat. Lovely Nette.

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:43:00 PM
    Beautiful entrance to Spring with this entry dear poet ! Your words here have such fantastic flow....this write drags one in to the depths of your joy Nette, it's great ! Have a wonderful week my friend....much love, james

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:40:00 PM
    This is very beautiful...guess I'm new since you've been away...looking forward to reading more of your lovely poetry..

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 7:17:00 PM
    It is nice to know you are okay. Nette, many hugs and smiles going your way. always~ PD

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 4:34:00 PM
    You have just made my day!!! Just knowing you're okay and then another Nette poem that has been so missed here---luv ya XXXXOOOO!!!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 2:05:00 PM
    What a pleasant surprise to see your name pop back with this beautiful poem, Nette!! I hope all's well, and that you are here to stay! Welcome home!

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 1:28:00 PM
    Hi Nette!!!!:-):-) I`ve missed you and your brilliant poetry so much.Seeing you here again make me smile from ear to ear!!:-) Hugs,Arild

  1. Date: 4/15/2013 12:45:00 PM
    HI NETTE!!! I'm happy to see you post's as lovely as ever. I hope you've been well.