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Springtime Alliteration

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Springtime Alliteration

Spring savagely starting
Seeking solace soon 
Snowing swirling storming
Sun somewhere shining?

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  1. Date: 3/31/2013 10:50:00 AM
    I like your savage spring...Let's hope the sun will win.

  1. Date: 3/17/2013 7:25:00 AM
    It's certainly not shining here. Hopefully better luck at your end.

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 5:22:00 AM
    Hi, I like your poem is sweet & short, but can you make it a bit longer next time. Welcome and enjoy!

  1. Date: 3/14/2013 4:01:00 AM
    Great combination sentences! I've used that 'seeking solace in solitude / ease the bullets from their chambers". ssss...keep it coming. cheers!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:54:00 PM
    Well, done, Rick!

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 4:40:00 PM
    Rick, this is a nice take on alliteration, i actually had fun working on an alliteration poem.. hope you like it if you come across the poem... always~ PD

  1. Date: 3/13/2013 10:33:00 AM
    I wish it was here Rick its cold and tryin gto snow, excellent alliteration xx