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Spring's perfect expose

Thus far, 
days facing
the warmest of season
this late of Spring,
the buds are in
perfect bloom

Oh how jealous the I
of the eyes that burst,
as the splash of cool
doth expose
what this soul covets 
as a rule

Oh that cool splash,
that perfect expose

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  1. Date: 8/12/2012 9:44:00 AM
    That splash cools my fevered brow in such a special way!

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 9:38:00 PM
    very nicely "exposed!!" and very nice to see you here tonight.

  1. Date: 7/16/2012 7:44:00 AM have captured that precise moment here....perfection! and thanks for stopping by my work! jimbo

  1. Date: 7/15/2012 9:10:00 AM
    The splash of cool is long gone and now we live with lack of pool. I tend to agree with you that spring and autumn are the times to cherish! Luv, Lizzie

  1. Date: 7/2/2012 8:35:00 PM
    a feeling of wonderfulness James.. a feeling of effervescence..luv.. hope u are enjoying the Summer with Noah.. we have another new pup we rescued.. she is a golden retriever.. blessings luv..

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 6:00:00 AM
    Nice! JP! Jimbo

  1. Date: 7/1/2012 5:48:00 AM
    Oh what a feeling, James? Thanks for this.

  1. Date: 6/29/2012 1:47:00 PM
    We could sure use that splash of cool here now. Enjoy your day.

  1. Date: 6/28/2012 3:46:00 PM
    james, looking forward for some more greeat stufff! :)huggs!

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 1:04:00 PM
    Ok...This one will require more time... : ) "splash of cool" and the "perfect expose"... A bulge? in a wet T-shirt?... in a short? .....I love "my" interpretation! Thanks for the entertainment, my dear friend. Ruben.

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 12:42:00 PM
    hehe, James you always manage to make me smile when I read your poetry.. Sometimes I just exhale.. That is a good thing.. Hope yourself and Noah are doing good.. Love from a cold Cape Town ;)

  1. Date: 6/27/2012 9:48:00 AM
    Spring never was so fair and your words are always rare; that splash of cool may be all there is for me in this heat we are having. I always find comfort in your poetry dear James. ! :)

  1. Date: 6/26/2012 9:13:00 AM
    your eyes feel the freshness of life... lovely, lovely work, james... one of your best!..:) huggs!

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 6:34:00 PM
    I KNOW what this, knowing your poetry, James!! Very nicely done.

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 5:33:00 PM
    such a sweet, fresh feeling..Light & Love

  1. Date: 6/24/2012 4:30:00 PM
    Beautiful eyes that see, enjoyed your verse James, hugs vie