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Below is the poem entitled SPRING FEVER which was written by poet Lyric Man. Please feel free to comment on this poem. However, please remember, PoetrySoup is a place of encouragement and growth.

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Look, it's the first bloom of spring
A proud daffodil stands all alone
Soon to be joined by others
And light up our lovely home

Like the sun she beams so brightly
Announcing that Spring is here
There's no shyness in her yellow bud
She wants our notice that much is clear

So like a magnet I'm drawn to her
And to all that she represents
The changing of the seasons
Gazing upon her brings sweet content

The birds are singing a happy song
The breeze is waving its approval
New beginnings are bursting forth
Bright colors are Winter's removal

Sleepy beauty is waking up
The prince has placed his kiss
The lone daffodil is now surrounded
Together they dance in bliss

Kindly my Spring fever is satisfied 
What once was hope has now arrived
And the world has come alive again
The long Winter I've survived!

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  1. Date: 3/11/2014 9:46:00 AM
    Nice poem I especially liked fifth stanza and last verse of last stanza

    Man Avatar Lyric Man
    Date: 3/11/2014 10:07:00 AM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Thanks so much!
  1. Date: 2/27/2014 10:45:00 AM
    I enjoyed this Dave, glad you survived. lol. We desperately need more winter here in California..doing rain dances. I love spring though and am trying to write something as nice as yours. BG

    Man Avatar Lyric Man
    Date: 2/27/2014 2:55:00 PM Block poet from commenting on your poetry

    Hi BG! Thanks for your thoughtful words. I can't wait to see what you come up with. Spring is coming!!